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Old 04-11-2007, 01:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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These belong to me, love and peace.
Unlike those who request hate and war.
These are my ideals.
Those are the ones who will hear them.
Reguardless, these ones like love and peace.....
are mine.
I share them like shoes to tread-in. LoL!!
Follow me, not....
Those.
To break bread with, even with Those to me they hate.
Yet and still I ate!
They became filled with these.
These thoughts of love and peace.
I share them with my lady.
Now, there are Those who don't believe-
but she does.
For this reason she is still with me holding tight.
For this reason I give to her, THESE and THOSE Tonite!
 

Old 05-17-2007, 05:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I felt a suspense while reading this. The use of bolding makes it stand out, as the statement it presents. It was good though, I enjoyed reading it.
 

Old 05-19-2007, 10:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Why Thank You DEEP 86! This is a poem clearly not for everyone. But for those who truly enjoy Love and Peace, it can be a haven of mind joy! Thank You for your kind remarks!
 

Old 05-19-2007, 11:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 05-19-2007, 10:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey Lil' Brother,

I am lovin this! This has the true signature of the Spider, Novel, thought provoking, layered, strong message, and a unique style of poetry that is fresh. Please come out of your web more often to share your work, lol. Love ya!!

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Old 05-21-2007, 10:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hello Big Sister!! (Painted One) Thank You for comments and I am so happy you enjoyed this work! Please forgive me for not being in the JPIC as much as I would like to be. The Spider as been on that spring mission, if you know what I mean.... I've been setting up webs everywhere!! (fictitious names) Mr. Peters needs a web by the snow blower, Ms. Jeniva need one by the coffee table, Mr. Roberts needs one in the shower, Mr. Bush needs one in the Oval Office! Anywho, it's great to be here tonite and to share with you all big sister! I look for you out there, and you too deep86! Or do I gotta put a wed by you pen and pad?! Love Ya too Painted One!
 

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Old 05-28-2007, 11:15 AM   #7 (permalink)
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A web within a web of peace and love. To dream the dream of harmony.
Great job Spider. keep spinning your webs they are indeed a work of art.

Blessings
Forestdawn
Goddess of the green grove.
Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 06-12-2007, 12:54 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Hey CURTIS - this poem was a bit puzzling actually - It's as if a maze of words or some such - where you think you've found the "out" - it's a dead end LOL --- Interesting weaving of words none-the-less - though a bit confusing...

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For this reason she is still with me holding tight.
For this reason I give to her, THESE and THOSE Tonite!
I'm kinda liking the resolution of the last 2 lines. For within the timid misery - there's someone to share the ambiguity with LOL

Thanx for the read

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Old 06-12-2007, 08:50 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Ms.Jaccquiic, thanks for your kind reply! However in stitches from the laughter in your commits here! Love and Peace is a maze in itself, so I wrote this one to highlight this fact! As for the "outs" There was only one way.....LOVE!
 

Old 06-12-2007, 09:06 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I thank you too Sally Roberts!! I won't forget you either. Your comments tell me you enjoy Love and Peace as I do. It bring me great joy that there are some like us still here! It seems war/ fighting would be the answer for the majority,I feel that is man's greatest sin. I believe a man can never live long enough to understand life. Let alone go to war and fight to take a life. Thanks again Sally Roberts!!
 


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