11-21-2007, 08:40 PM
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Last Online: 06-04-2011 02:54 AM
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Re: Timepiece
mmhmmm.
very interesting.
People seem to be doing a lot of Tankas. Is there a challenge or something that I'm missing? 
Anyway, I liked this one in particular :]
I liked the last line.....very interesting how you directed this poem.
Good job :]
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"To the world you may be one person, but to one person, you may be the world"
omg omg omg!!! I say HUGGLES all the time...and....
ahh!! A HUGGLES SMILIE!!!!
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