Timepiece

Kit Carson · 11-17-2007, 12:34 PM

Time was, long ago

Ages within, more to go

New time comes each day

Knowing how to spend the time

A secret each must unwind

~

Mike Carson

11-13-2007

mangodroplet · 11-21-2007, 08:40 PM

mmhmmm.
very interesting.
People seem to be doing a lot of Tankas. Is there a challenge or something that I'm missing?

Anyway, I liked this one in particular :]
I liked the last line.....very interesting how you directed this poem.
Good job :]