Creative Traditional:

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Kit Carson

You must not burn

And remember to fly

Don't forget to learn

To touch the sky

NICE! I like the flow of your poem! The pantoum is not an easy form to scribe at all - and yours flows rather nicely. I love how the very last stanza culminates, the message is wonderful. It's like a picture movie of sorts that sort of gives the reader that "Aha!" feeling.

Thanx for the read!

JAcquii.

[Kit Carson]

Thank you Jaquii...this is the poem I submitted to Poetic Type Published.

[Sally Roberts]

Exceptionally well written Kit:

In every aspect. The structure was perfect! Your message was surreal and the imagery was right on!
We must all stop to smell the roses. Our time here on earth is very short and the end is nearer than we think.
To do those things we wished we'd have done when we're too old to do them must be done now. We shouldn't wait to see, hear, feel, taste and smell the things that are available right before us.
I always try to remember to do just that.
Thanks for the superb read my friend! keep them coming your talents are indeed excellent!!

Blessings

[Kit Carson]

Thank you very much Sally. I find your talent amazing and always look forward to reading your work...I am behind on everyone and need to catch up.

[nomadicrhymer]

Kit I love the feel and the flow and the message in this piece.
Don't forget to learn

To touch the sky


Nomad

[Kit Carson]

Thanks for your kind words my friend.