Creative Traditional:

[Kit Carson]

To touch the sky

You must keep trying

To remember to fly

And forget that you're dying


You must keep trying

To wear that crown

And forget that you're dying

And never look down


To wear that crown

You must not burn

And never look down

Don't forget to learn


You must not burn

And remember to fly

Don't forget to learn

To touch the sky

[Checkmate]

wow...great pantoum...got that jim feeling to it...great job my friend.

[Kit Carson]

Very high praise indeed! Thank you Scott.

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Kit,

Awesome Pantoum and the message it tells. Thank you for sharing this!

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[erikestabrook]

really cool write, good theme

[Kit Carson]

Thank you very much Kimberly and Eric, I went ahead and put this one in my book, I like it a lot, too...it has very deep meaning to me.

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Kit,

I came back for another read and I am glad I did. So much meaning and emotion is woven into this piece Kit...just amazing my friend. I love it. Congrats again on your book , and I wish you the best and that your gift does indeed Touch The Sky....you are right there. Love ya!

Kimberly

[reasonrhymer]

Hey Kit,

Well done, I am trying to reach it. Uplifting and insightful. And it should go in a book.


reasonrhymer

[JolieH]

Nice Pantoum Mike,
the chaos is a struggle to rise through.

You make these look easy...

[Kit Carson]

Thank you George and thank you very much Jolie, my dear daughter infected me with this form and I can't seem to stop...they are delightful when you see it all click together like a jigsaw puzzle...but, yes it can be slightly painful in the making.