Creative Traditional:

[Bear]

The Tranquility of the Forest
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I desire to be in the forest
A place that’s so serene and tranquil
To be Alone with Mother Nature
To observe the Maker of our world
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I yearn to withdraw from the city
A place polluted with the a tense nervous energy
And living a life with the cities frenzied velocity
That’s ravaging the quintessence out of me
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I crave to be quickly transported
Going on a journey back in time
To a unostentatious life
With a slower, simpler existence
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I long to be in the forest
Gathering new energy from the wilderness
Rejuvenating my anguished heart
Letting my soul soar in the lofty tangerine sky like an eagle
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I wish to be in the presence of Mother Earth
Hearing her gentle voice calling me
Hearing the call of the majestic eagle
Listening to the "ancient ones"whispering in the breeze
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I’m in the solace of the colorful forest
Beneath the canopy of a picturesque sky
Where my heart and soul are at peace
And my spirit can soar the mountaintops with an eagle

[reasonrhymer]

I be out there flying with you. Nice one, I could feel the emoting of emotion in this.

A cool breeze.

RR

[Bear]

Thank you so much for the great comment and for stopping by to read my poem Ill see you in the heavens circling around and drifting on the cool breeze
handshakes reasonrhymer
bear

[JolieH]

Incredible Bear,
you've penned such a beautiful escape.

[Bear]

Thank you so much Jolie for this incredible comment and thank you for reading my poems
hugs kisses
bear

[butchiesmom]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Bear

I desire to be in the forest
A place that’s so serene and tranquil
To be Alone with Mother Nature
To observe the Maker of our world

I feel the tranquility just reading this!

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Bear

I crave to be quickly transported
Going on a journey back in time
To a unostentatious life
With a slower, simpler existence

I've felt the same yearning, but have come to the realization that even though it looks like a tranquil time then, it had it's own problem.

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Bear

Listening to the "ancient ones"whispering in the breeze

I read this and thought of when I was in my hammock last summer and heard the same whispers!

Beautiful poem, as usual.

hugs,
Gail

[Bear]

Gail thank you for this great and wonderful comment its nice to know there is someone else that felt what I wrote
hugs kisses
tom