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Old 09-03-2007, 02:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Twilight Ride

A soft breeze blew flowed through the leaves of the trees
The birds were singing sweet melodies
The scent of wild-flowers and honeysuckle filled the air
Flower petals drift from the cherry and apple trees

Drifted through the breeze this spring twilight
Along the edge of the grove were lush green ferns
As she rode amidst all this splendor of nature
So quiet and tranquil
~
Her beautiful stallion born on vast prairies
Now stabled upon her ranch
Protected from the symphony of summer storms
And being hunted by man
~
When she rode she knew her stallion was
The brother to the mighty Zephyr,
And the starlit night is their canopy
As the skies darken
~
In the cadence of its hoof beats
You can hear the majestic song that
Mother Nature softly whispers
In the moonlit grove
~
Freedom whispers on the wind
When they venture out for a ride
In natures magnificent twilight
On this beautiful spring day
 

Old 09-03-2007, 08:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Bear,
This is so beautiful. I imagined it all the way through and found the most pleasurable ride through nature into the twilight. This world you wrote is truly heaven. The honeysuckle and cherry blossoms are tranquility to my senses. They are like snowflakes that never melt away. Thank you for the beautiful stallion. I’ll care for him in my dream stable, and ride him through the forest of sweetest dreams until each dawn separates us.
Jolie

"You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you think you cannot do." (Eleanor Roosevelt)
 

Old 09-04-2007, 12:32 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Jolie

your very welcome sweetie So happy that you have enjoyed your twilight ride . Thank you so much for the fantastic comment
hugs kisses
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