Creative Traditional:

[EeZeBard]

~~~
Hiking through a woodland glen
as mellow shards
of sunset bend
to capture
bright
in waters clear
reflections
caught
from mountains shear
The silhouette sings twilight's best
enchanting beauty
north by west
'Twas then my heart
forgot to beat
while visions to my gaze
complete
A gentle sigh
resets its rhythm
I step toward this face from heaven
~
In twilight's eerie haze she stood
amongst the tranquil shades of wood
where timeless paths
bestow the land
she beckons
with extended hand
Surroundings
waver
hardly seen
I spring a trap
laid there
between
then falling deep
to darkest dread
above ...
the trap
once more is spread
~
I tumble blind through timeless mist
as things unseen
tear clothes to bits
Attesting shrieks
bare blackest dreams
when fingers
grab
they choke the screams
I'm lifted
tossed
to brink of ledge
I scramble
safely
back from edge

Breath wheezed ...

lungs filled ...

sanguine air

but shadows dance
to flame's despair
~
Perusing cavern round about
entwined with scents
of mash and stout
The shadows fade
as faces bare
their eyes unblinking
strangely stare
Just who they be I have no clue
in cloaks of rag
bereft of shoe
A boiling pot
spills
overflows
aroma wafts
to pull my nose
~
As grumbles strike beneath my chest
a bowl they pass
I say my blest
The taste is odd
but strangely
good
then laughs
coalesce
beneath their hood
It strikes me now this tale I'm told
just echoed back
from memories cold
Beware
the pit
from beauty set
where mortal feet
tread
with regret
~
I sense
the danger lurking near
too late
I'm thrust
through worlds of cheer
round about
with no control
immersed in love
then stripped of soul
Tears of pleasure
tears of pain
round about
and back again
Conscious whirling
twisting
vain
Blackness lifting
drenched with rain
~
Hiking through a woodland glen
as mellow shards
of sunset bend
to capture
bright
in waters clear
reflections
caught
from mountains shear
The silhouette sings twilight's best
enchanting beauty
north by west
'Twas then my heart
forgot to beat
as visions through my haze
complete
A pondered thought
sends senses reeling

'tis déjà vu ...

I've got this feeling
~~~

[Sally Roberts]

Eeze:

WOW! The rhyming flowed so smooth. It was like drinking a nice warm mug of cocoa.
I really loved this poem.
Very, VERY well done. I read it several times. Thanks you for sharing this beautful poem

Blessings

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

wonderful warning of vaine appearences... this write read like a nursary ryhme... and to me very classic and smooth.... loved how you provided feelings of peace and then the abrupt turn to frightenthe reader with a fall and a great of hooded strangers... witha unlikely brew... wasn't sure wether to take some of the descriptions in this write as metaphorical though..... would like a direct explanation of the overall point the writer was trying to make...
if that's cool with you freind?

phil