Creative Traditional:

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

the theme of your write is universal and well expressed.. as with the natural flow of the sonnet... i think words can be orchastrated and used beautifully with scheme or freestyle.... i have read great fun works of art and other melencoly works that produce great feeling as well... all that matters to the reader, in my opinion.. is what amount of passion and heart the poet puts into his or her art.....
great thoughts and inspiration in this write nevertheless...
i thank you for your shining talent....

light and peace to you
phil

[Sally Roberts]

Mysty:

It is most difficult to write a good Sonnet, (for me anyway) I love to challenge myself to all kinds of different types of poetry. It makes the poet aware of what he/she has within them to write.
Did you know that there are over 50 different types of poetry? A sonnet is just one out of many.

You have done this one greatly!! And I loved reading it! Keep them coming.

Thanks for sharing
Blessings