Creativity Outlet:

[MsJacquiiC]

New Challenge In The Creativity Outlet
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[nomadicrhymer]

No, no, no, Ms. J....never thunk it!! but I wasn't sure of the whole layout, I had missed the whole CCC thing in the middle, at first, and was scrambling at the end, so valid question, Madam Queen Poetess! This was a pretty good challenge! I enjoyed it tremendously.

Nomad

[MsJacquiiC]

LOL - OK THERESE - I was just messin
But really speaking - In the poetic forms section there are really difficult forms with tremendously difficult schematics - but this is why I love the CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme the best... It gives you a lot to say (15 syllables each line) And the rhyme scheme is aa,bb,cc,a,b,c ----> relatively easy when you consider different sonnet forms and some of the old French forms :sweat:

Anyway - Ya did good! Very nice piece of writing

Jacquii.

[PaintedDiary]

Ms Nomad!!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!

[Moonchild]

SWEET TOOTH ~ CINQ TROIS DECALA RHYME

You are like strawberry fruit minus seeds with sweetness supreme.
Over your voluptuous curves I pour chocolate and whip cream.
My delectable taste created my own pink flesh sundae.
Teasing me you look tempting to eat on a hot summer day.
From nothing to something you are juicy berries to my cream.
You’re the aftertaste of more that lasts after my pleasure scream.
I’ve a sweet tooth and I can’t resist your thick and fruity teem.
I dive into your creamy center with indulgent esteem.
When I’ve had my fill I lick my lips in satiated play
cause nothing is like the cool melt of your desires outward stream.

© August 11, 2007 Karen Davies

[MsJacquiiC]

WOW! What a most lovely picture
the cinq trois deca la rhyme is not bad either....
however you did miss the rhyme scheme of aabbcccabc
but wow - I'm hungry now

Jacquii.

[Moonchild]

Thank you Jacquii.
I'm glad you like.
I fixed it. Now what do you think?
I think it made it better.

[PaintedDiary]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by PaintedDiary

This was indeed one of the most exciting challenges for me to attempt.......having said that, and thinking about Vodka Slayer's vampire story, and the photograph.......I attempt an abstract CinqTroisDecaLa rhyme.

Strawberry Decay

Ancient seed, of a soul colored claret, when he came to me
Alas came the day, my mortality, no longer reign free
I partake of sweet revelries, strawberry of the unknown
Tantalizing aromas, as I compliment your neck bone
Your breath pulsates heavily, as we succumb to wanton flesh
Taste of human essence, a copious harvest, savors fresh
You slide into Utopia's Shangrila, feeding pink flesh
You spin a web of geometric pearls in and out of me
So fine the pronounced arteries of young men, not fully grown
Slumber deep my love for I've ingested you, at your request

This challenge created by you Ms Jacquii was one of my favorite challenges!!!!...hope we bring this back soon, after more participation!!

[MsJacquiiC]

I absolutely love the CinqTroisDecaLa rhyme! One of my favorite forms.
And yeah - would love to start posting new challenges. Perhaps soon after I begin promoting the forum again. If you have a challenge in mind though = send it to me though! I'll be more than happy to make complimentary graphic, post it up on the portal and send out an email to all

[SuzyQ]

Yay... I like challenges!

[PaintedDiary]

OK! I will be coming up with something soon for approval! lol