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[alanmdouglas]

New Challenge In The Creativity Outlet
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[PaintedDiary]

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Originally Posted by MsJacquiiC

Yep - this one's a keeper LOL - WOW KIM - Riveting has already been said - but I'll reiterate in agreement - This was quite a nice story - I agree also that there should be dialogue possibly even dialogue of what the townsfolk called Anna...

At anyrate - Just - You kinda raised the bar with this challenge response. Very nice piece of writing - I'm impressed actually... It seems everytime I attempt a shortstory or the like - I loose concentration LOL - Why I like the shorter pieces

Very nice. Thanx for the sharing.
PS - If I come up with some suggestions I'll post them in your Inspiring Novelists thread.

Jacquii.

btw - one thing I noticed - you spelled "suet" in the 5th paragraph, close to last sentence.
Suet is a raw beef or mutton fat - I think you mean soot

Whooooppppsssss! Thanks for pointing that out Ms Jacquii! Thank you also for taking precious time to read and comment Ms Jacquii. I loved putting this idea together, and will expand the characters and dialog of the characters as well. Thank you again.

{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}

[butchiesmom]

I have something written but need another day to be able to finish it. Adventures in hammock construction, I'm on the third attempt and wait for the results to finish my work, lol. Hmm, I hope we don't hit the ground again, lol.
Gail
I don't often do the challenges because I usually draw a blank, but since I was already trying to write something and the words could be worked in, I said "What the heck (well, not exactly that word) and started writing, lol.

[Moonchild]

~BIONICALLY KINETIC~

He was a sophisticated
grouse who was quality with the quill.
He amused the unkind critics
with their feverish repertoire
with rapid-fire rhyming skill of the spill.

His thought to paper
coordination was bionically kinetic.
With theatrics behind his pen
his hand was often magnetic.

He could take a word
like railroad and single out the compound,
analyzing each word separate until
a whole new meaning was found
and a comfort inside him bound.

© August 23, 2007 Karen Davies