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Old 12-10-2006, 03:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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If I kept a diary,
Of all my nightly dreams,
Soon... they would reveal,
Each and every plan and scheme.

I would be, confronted with,
The fact, that it is true,
That all my secret dreams at night,
Are you, and only you.

If I kept a diary,
And penned each detail in,
All who’d read the words I write,
Would know my secret sin,

They’d know how much I love you
They would see how much I care,
Then sense the depth, this love for you,
With nothing left to spare,

They’d see us meet, each night in love,
In sentences I'd write,
And feel the passion in each word,
Of dreams I have each night.

If I kept a diary,
Of dreams I have for you,
Then you might read the words I write,
And finally know it's true.
 

Old 04-07-2007, 09:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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They’d know how much I love you
They would see how much I care,
Then sense the depth, this love for you,
With nothing left to spare,

They’d see us meet, each night in love,
In sentences I'd write,
And feel the passion in each word,
Of dreams I have each night.
Dear Ron,

I am sorry I took this long to respond to this awesome poem. The title caught my eye, having the word "Diary" in it, hehhe. As I read on, it was so special, so private, so delicate. To idea that a man would have a "Dream Diary" of his love was amazing to me. The two stanzas I pulled out did my own heart good. Thanks for making me feel soooo good with your words tonight.

{{{~~**PD**~~}}}


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Old 04-08-2007, 12:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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PaintedDiary,
thank you for reading DreamDiary. Is this a page from my diary......... Ha......... I'd never tell. Who ever it is, she doesn't even know he exist........

"If I kept a diary
of dreams I have for you,
Then you might read the words I write,
and finally know it's true.

again, thanks.......... Ron
 


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