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Old 01-03-2007, 09:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Gentle Wind


Morning creeps into our room
And in the soft glow
Her silhouette
Dark upon the linen sheets
Is there for me to devour.

Auburn hair, tangled
By sleep obscures
Her face,
Softly undulating with her
Rhythmic exhalations.

A feather from my pillow
Interrupts her dreams as she
Sleepily brushes
Where it was moments before,
Exposing her wondrous nature.

Her breasts, firm and sweet
Rise and fall with the cadence
Of her breath,
Swaying softly as grapefruit
Tickled by the gentle wind.
 

Old 01-03-2007, 11:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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alright lash, this was very sensual not trashy though,
I like the descriptions
 

Old 03-23-2007, 04:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Dear lasher,

This was soft and classy. Spoke of a tender love, and loving descriptions. Beautifully executed. Fantabulous write lasher!! Thank you for sharing!

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Old 03-23-2007, 04:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you Painted, I'm glad you liked it and Eric, thank you also. I tried not to make it crass and tasteless. Thanx again T
 


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