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05-28-2008, 10:07 PM

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Sacred Rose

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hey everybody, this is my first post, so please comment

Her Stare

The color of her eyes
more blue than the sea
capture and envelop me

I struggle not
and gladly drown
in the eyes
that do surround

When she looks into my eyes
it takes my breath with much surprise

Sinking down into her gaze
my lungs fill up
sight starts to haze

My skin crawls
as my body falls
sinking down into her stare
smiling, and without a care
my heart sits still,
lungs void of air
smiling, sinking into her stare

06-18-2011, 11:22 AM	#2 (permalink)
nomadicrhymer Moderator Name: Therese Gender: Location: Claremont, CA nomadicrhymer's Mood: Last Online: 04-05-2012 11:54 AM	Re: Her Stare Sounds like love to me... Nomad

06-18-2011, 03:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
MsJacquiiC Miss Understood Name: Jacquii Cooke Gender: Location: In a cloud of smoke. MsJacquiiC's Mood: Last Online: Today 03:30 AM	Re: Her Stare Sounds like truelove to me Nice write Sacred Rose. Thanks for the share. Jacquii.
	“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems. My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce... My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” --- MsJacquiiC JacquiiCooke.com \| Poetica Magnifique Professional Web & Graphic Design Services GreetingsGalleryOnline \| Beautifully Free e-Cards You REALLY Like Us? ==> Support JPiC with a donation or Purchase a premium membership

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