Emotional Romantic:

[deep_poet86]

Whoever thought we would
say goodbye in a place like this
No time to stand still
Only the sighs in our hearts
Everything is lost

All homes burned to the ground
I walk through the rubble to see if there
is a face that is familier
A lot of these people I don't know
Some are asking for help
Some are pleading
It's in their eyes
I keep on walking
These people are not my problem

Over the hill and past the creek
is where my lady cries
I find her under some boards and broken glass
I tell her everything will be alright
It will be over soon

She is coughing up blood
Where our unborn child was kept
blood is slowly running from her side
She has tears in her eyes
"I don't want to leave you, I will lose you again."
She reaches out for me
I step back
It's hard to look her in the eye
Especially since I just came from another bed
She knows

"Do you love me...?" She has trouble breathing
and speaking now
It will be over soon
"Love is a quiet gift, I only ever shared it with you."
She cries harder now
I turn around to face her once more

Her beautiful golden hair is covered with blood
her eyes once green are swollen
It doesn't even look like her
I won't cry over this one
I had many women
I will find another one after she goes off

When I seen her eyes close
it came over me anyways
The tears I didn't want to show
to the world or to her
It seems to be so hard to let her go
It is so hard to understand
My heart is turning into cold stone
Maybe I will never love again

By: Lee-Ann Wolsey
12/21/2006
10:26AM

[Bear]

such a sad write Deep Poet it is beautifully written. The image is one of great sadness and despair of losing a true love
bear

[Bear]

this is a very sad write Deep Poet. The Image of heartache and despair as one loses a true Love
hhugs kisses
tom

[deep_poet86]

Thank you Bear, yeah it is a sad one

[Curtis Spider Lee]

Yeah, this is a sad poem deep86. But I love how this story unfolds! Nicely done!

[deep_poet86]

Thanks Curtis Spider Lee

[erikestabrook]

hmm when I think this I think well its a tragedy no wits up to you to specify the specific tragedy and if you do that the poem would be even more gripping

[deep_poet86]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by erikestabrook

hmm when I think this I think well its a tragedy no wits up to you to specify the specific tragedy and if you do that the poem would be even more gripping

I thank you for reading this, you are right. I didn't even bother to let my readers know what happened to cause the tradgedy, perhaps if I have a strike of creativity I can make some changes Again thanks for the comment