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I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

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Old 11-10-2006, 08:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'M CHASING AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM
Ever since i saw you for the very first time
I knew that i would never stand a chance
Sometimes i think that love is just a torturous crime
With all of these no's and i can'ts
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

I didn't really explain myself at first
Since i heard you say that you had a boyfriend
But now that i've seen you, i think i've been cursed
My love for you will never come to an end
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

I already know that it's senseless to try
But my heart which you stole from me refuses to listen
Whenever i speak to you my mind floats up to the sky
And my emotions, they start to blisten
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

My feelings just blisten right up with love
Why? You ask, i have no clue
Maybe you could get an answer from God above
But i think i could be diagnosed with the rare love flu
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

Whenever i'm feeling alone and bored
My thoughts, they always travel to you
I really hate how the love in my heart is stored
It makes me melt into an emotional stew
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

Not only in my conscience, but also in my dreams
You always seem to always be there
Torturing and haunting me, thats the way that it seems
And it's come to the point that i can't not care
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

Why must i always have to feel this way
I ask myself that question everyday
I just can't end my feelings and it hurts my heart per'se
Cause i know you've already been taken too far away
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

I loathe myself so much for the way that i feel
It isn't at all any fun for me
It's not my normal self, but it's very real
Cause all my mind is saying is keep trying to get thee
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

I can't talk to you at all anymore
Please don't cry, i just need time to let my heart mend
I just need to get you out of my heart's back door
And get rid of this stupid love trend
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream

So goodbye for now, my beautiful wondrous love
To both you and him i wish the best of luck
Just open your ears to the sound of that dove
Which has turned you two into a couple that's lovestruck
I'm Chasing an Impossible Dream
 

Old 11-11-2006, 06:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Hey there again :)
Well, Ed, you somehow out done yourself again. It seems with each poem you put out, they only keep getting better. I can feel this, it speaks in Volume. Heading towards the next one.
 

Old 11-11-2006, 01:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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wonderful, I felt this one,
it had sincerity and uniqueness,
it was very wordy though and soem of the feeling I think might hav ebeen re-stated,
however I didn't mind the length since it was all quality
 

Old 01-23-2008, 09:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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that was a great poem it definitely had so much feeling behind it. i especially love the line "it makes me melt into an emotional stew", it has such potency in those words. so many people probably can relate to that impossible dream of love that never seems to happen for you.
Absolutely wonderful!


Life's a bitch then you die!!!!




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Old 01-26-2008, 03:39 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Awesome poem ...... just one query .. what does blisten mean??

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Old 01-27-2008, 08:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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well Mysty I thought the same thing but didn't want to be the idiot to ask!!!
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worded that wrong it was suppose to say sound like an idiot and ask. brain and fingers not working together.
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Old 01-27-2008, 10:03 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Uh huh.... guess they are still not working lol.... you could have just edited your original statement instead of letting it be read. I would rather be the idiot asking so that I may learn instead of remaining an idiot in the dark... but well Yeah I have guts.... so I will be the idiot asking for all of us lol.
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Old 01-28-2008, 04:25 PM   #8 (permalink)
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well that would be because i don't know how to edit my original post and it was already sent when realized what it said.
 


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