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Old 04-11-2007, 12:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I cried
On the Inside.
Hid tears behind eyes
That appeared so dry.
My pride was such
A good disguise.

I died
On the Inside.
My spirit fell
From it's sullen shell.
Still no one could tell
That I was burning in hell.

I was angry
On the Inside.
I'd scream so loud
It would knock me down.
Still no one else
Could hear a sound.

I was sad
On the inside.
My heart turned blue,
Then it broke in two.
Still a smile shined through,
And nobody knew...

...That I missed you
On the Inside.
Feelings so strong,
That didn't belong.
I knew they were wrong,
So I'd pretend they were gone.

But now I'm ready
On the Inside,
To take this drought,
And pour it out.
Everyone is about
To hear me shout...

...That I love you
On the Inside.
I cannot stray
My heart away
For another day.
I hope that you'll say
That you love me
On the Inside.
 

Old 04-12-2007, 04:21 AM   #2 (permalink)
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yeah, luv gotta be manifested for one & of one consisting the inside first. i could relate & would claim to be a strong advocate. seemed as if you had fun with this. enjoyed the rhythm & rhyme format. especially was diggin this passage your conclusion,

"I hope that you'll say
That you love me
On the Inside."

keep painting artist.
 

Old 04-12-2007, 05:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Ashley ...,

Know these feelings
the way they rumble
around inside ya...

the way ya wonder
when will they ever
feel the way they
did... before.

Your write brought
out thoes thoughts
to be...

reviewed, rethought,
shook about...

to wonder some more

of... is it time.

The Following Text Is Quoted:
...That I love you
On the Inside.
I cannot stray
My heart away
For another day.
I hope that you'll say
That you love me
On the Inside.
She hasn't ever left
the inside... it's...

could the outside ever
know her that intensely
again, that is the
question????

Great write...

Thanks for the read.
 


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