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Old 10-04-2007, 02:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Jolie asked by a comment if I would do a poem as a train ride...This was inspired by her comment....Jolie, here is your train ride my dear...enjoy!

“Her Majestic Train Ride”

Upon the steps
Of theses mountains
I long
For one, that I love
Hearing her lonesome whistle blow
~
Looking out
Through the widow of her soul
~
This train I ride
Unearthing a memory
Deep from within my soul
She whispers
Many things
I have forgotten
~
The times she sat here next to me
Looking out this same window
Another place, another time
She would speak
Ever so close to me
Hearing the sounds
Of a not so lonesome whistle blow
~
Looking out, upon her rolling hills
Graced with wild flower
Lined with paths of love
Paths of running streams
Running streams
Nourishing her colors
~
Framed
By
Mother Nature
She touched my soul
Kissing me with her warm embrace
~
Looking atop her ice caped glacier
Seeing her Clearer
Than any dream
I can imagine
~
High above
Soars an eagle
In flight
Looking down on me
His eye
A compass
Reflecting the direction
Of time in motion
~
Beauty surrounds me
All around
A sphere
Of
Majestic color
~
Paradise
Stimulating my soul
Not to mention
The beauty sitting in front of me
I
Smile
Asking for your hand
Standing up
Embracing your beautiful face
In the palm of my hands
I kiss you tenderly
On your forehead
Whispering in your ear
Jolie
You’re as majestic
And beautiful
As this train ride

©Arthur Henn
The sunrises
Unfolding light onto darkness
Warmth embraces
"Mother Nature"
The sunsets
Showing us
Gods
Painted sky

Arthur Henn
 

Old 10-06-2007, 04:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Awwwwwww KAWAII! (Japanese for cute ) That's seriously amazing stuff, to write something like that out only from a comment. Kick ass write
POETS
One Thought.
One Moment.
Endless Possibilities.

 


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