The Love Affair of the Moon and the Sea

Poetry Garden · 10-20-2007, 06:57 AM

THE LOVE AFFAIR OF THE MOON & THE SEA
Mystically with all her beauty
The moon captivated the yearning sea
Alluring as she was
He fell in love with her
She controlled his every ebb and flow
He ached day after day
Only to touch her...
His sorrowful waves
Destined to crash upon the shore
In all his misery
Until one day the beautiful moon
Shined down on him
Touching every drop that he was made of
Soothing as she was
He no longer felt pain and grief
His heart was filled with love
She made him complete
And so began the love affair of
The moon and the sea
©dp

lasher · 10-20-2007, 08:22 AM

Hey now PG,

It's good to read you again - as usual, you did not disappoint....
This write (little story) is chock full 'o pleasant imagery - beautiful visuals......
I enjoyed mucho...............

JolieH · 10-20-2007, 07:14 PM

I can see the reflection of the moon cast on the ocean's rippled surface. It's just beautiful. I like personified poems. This is very sweet.

Poetry Garden · 10-20-2007, 07:23 PM

Thank you Lasher and Jolie H for reading my poetry...and you are right Lasher I have been away way too long. I'm so happy you both like this, it's one of my favorites.

PaintedDiary · 10-20-2007, 09:05 PM

PG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where have you been dahling? I needed my PG fix and got it, lol! This was scrumpshalicious as usual. Beautiful, full of paintings within this canvas and all done with barest minimum of space. That is masterful writing.

Touching every drop that he was made of

Oh how beautiful.......just

Please don't stay away too long. Love ya!

PD