Emotional Romantic:

[ronbliss]

More Than A Friend

The years that I have known you
And the hours that we have shared,
The heartfelt things that we've discussed
With secrets never spared.

A brush against your softened cheek,
A rub down when you're tense,
It always seemed to end right there,
And did not make much sense.

We were so close yet far away,
I tried to get inside,
But you repelled each new advance,
Was it your fear or pride?

You see me as a personal friend,
A friend and nothing other,
I see you as a friend of mine,
But also as a lover.

I tell you as I write these lines
If you should ever be,
So lonely that you need a friend,
Then you can call on me.

I'll be your friend; I'll be your man,
And I'll make love to you,
Do all the things that you would like
Until the night is through.

Sweet love.... when sunlight strikes your bed,
Then I would have to flee,
But when the night returns to you,
Then you.... can call on me!

Now then...... before anyone draws conclusions based on the content of this poem, I need to tell you.... this is strictly a fantasy poem. The secretary at work said I always wrote poems about everyone and everything but never one for her. She said she wanted a sexy poem and I wrote this for her. Again, it is fantasy..... smiling.

[PaintedDiary]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by ronbliss

More Than A Friend
Sweet love.... when sunlight strikes your bed,
Then I would have to flee,
But when the night returns to you,
Then you.... can call on me!

Now then...... before anyone draws conclusions based on the content of this poem, I need to tell you.... this is strictly a fantasy poem. The secretary at work said I always wrote poems about everyone and everything but never one for her. She said she wanted a sexy poem and I wrote this for her. Again, it is fantasy..... smiling.

Dear Ron,

I am sure your friend was pleased with the outcome of this poem! Those last stanzas were spot on. The whole piece was just fantabulous. The rhyming scheme was flawless. Loved it!

Kim: lol

[ronbliss]

PaintedDiary,
Thank you for reading and responding to the poem......... More than a friend. It was a fun poem to write and pure fantasy. I stressed that point because so much of this sort of thing goes on in the work place and I knew whoever read it would think it to be a true to life experience. But alas, it was not. Thanks PD....... thanks a lot...... Been on the road lately and this is my first day on the forum in a while. Ron.

[Tee]

This was beautiful!!

[deep_poet86]

Wow this is a great fantasy poem! I loved it, very enjoyable read.
I must say, based on fantasy or not. I have experienced this before
so I can relate personally and emotionally to this poem
Again thanks for the great read

[KayaOtah]

nice beautiful poem.. so sad I'm not the age to go on dates... jkjk
*smiles*

[MsJacquiiC]

Ooooooooooooooooo! SCANDALOUS LOL - Now I know what I've always been missing: A scandalous affair with the one who can sort my mail (well not really)

Indeed! But only a fantasy - right? LOL - I liked this write RON!
Thanx for the blush erm I mean the share

Jacquii.

[ronbliss]

Jacquii, Kayaotah, Lee Ann, Tee,

Thanks to each of you for taking time to read, "More Than A Friend". Thank you even more for taking the time to respond. I truly appreciate it.

Ms. Jacquui, thank you for saying you liked it but I guarantee you, it was fantasy......

Kyanta, Thank you for saying it was a beautiful poem, sweet girl, you are so young and you have a whole lifetime ahead of you. Use it wisely and leave no path of regrets.

Lee Ann, I think when we can see some of ourselves in a poem it is that much more enjoyable and meaningful. Thank you for writing.

Tee, Thank you for saying the poem was beautiful. Tee is a beautiful name.

Ron

[KayaOtah]

erm.. I'm a boy...
*smiles*
just that the poem makes me wanna get a girl.. Just kidding

[Jer4clarity]

Ron,

Maybe not your secretary but you've experienced this before...and so have I. Even in a marriage there can be moments like this....unfortunately. So, your work touched on a few of my memories. The questions is can we still understand why some would repel us. That is true love. Maybe not a gratifying but it's the stuff that connections are really made of.

The other thing about fantasy is that it is as allusive as "wanting more than a thank you for the back rub" when we are being repelled. They both kindle the same flame of imagination but not reality.

Boy, your poem really got me going! Great job here. I'll bet your secretary is having a few fantasies about the back rubs she'll never get! hehe

Jerry