Ode To Passion

athlone · 12-05-2006, 05:33 AM

Ode To Passion

Such passion lies between soft thighs
of beauty’s earthly form.
Her blossomed lips and sculpted hips
my hungry eyes adorn.
For sweet caress of rose-bud breast
O I would gladly die,
to be reborn in misted dawn
with love’s departing sigh.

MsJacquiiC · 12-05-2006, 06:22 AM

Hey ATHLONE!

1. Welcome to the Community - if you so desire, please introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section.

2. I AM LOVING THIS POEM - such exquisite intimacy. Lust? Possibly. Lewd? NEVER. Love? Such a broad definition of that word - I dare not answer LOL - But truly:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Her blossomed lips and sculpted hips
my hungry eyes adorn.

Seems you've sculped your poem to perfection. Makes my hungry eyes THIRST... Very nice 1st piece to share with the Community!

I enjoyed this one very much!
Thanx,

Jacquii.

nomadicrhymer · 12-06-2006, 01:27 PM

Awesome....lovin it!

THerese

Benny · 12-06-2006, 10:20 PM

Great imagery...kept me drinking each word and vision in deeply. That's what a poem is supposed to do and I love this one.

athlone · 12-07-2006, 03:10 AM

Jacquii, THerese, Benny.
Thank you all for your kind and warm comments.
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