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OUR LOVE AS THE DREAMS OF ANCIENT STARS

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Old 03-11-2007, 09:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These lines I sing myself these days
Quite often
A hymn of spiritual love
Quite regularly
Your beauty I praise
I sing a song of we

There's
No need to know anything
No need of a reason to be
The quiet of solitude shall beautify you
When you know that we are only forms
With faith in the message of the Lord crucified
An oath once fulfilled
As onto the next life we are made to be, we are shorn
Or of your shining smile
Of stardust long ago whispered into being, we are
A story, truly, to see!!!

Though they may call me a liar fortune teller, or crazy gypsy soul
All hate will die, my enemies, I warn
And pray for the dead, and for the hating hated forlorn
God is in all of us
And will reach the depths of our souls
And persuede us one day
As is His goal
With the shining light, our hands, hearts and eyes are made of
We would surely wish to give our love to you
As your love encircles me, Gina, I a spy of God's hand
I drink the pure wine of the truest love, reborn
And love the land
Thus, I am
Dying shall dying-ness be!
On the light travelling is the absolute truth known
I cannot comprehend
Life rectified, I pray, in the spirit world, completely grown
Where, as angels, high, we will play
One day, and one day more
This life is both trial and gift, I see

Like unknown silohuetes breathed into the seed of life, by God
We are the promise and the intention
We are the stars' melody realized
Come, Love, and dance with me
Celebrate the dying winter, and blooming spring's invention
Of all that has come our way, and all that yet will be
With spiritual joy and teary eyes
Let's jump naked and swim in a lake
This life is both beauty and horror to see
Let us be!!!

Our ancestral forms, we quietly remember
Uncertain of all we are, and of the future, and the message sender
This life's progression too oft' a truth we are overwhelmed to see
So unsure
When will we be brave and learn to love our enemies, and , friends, be?
When will the lover's heart, learn to see all that is holy ... and glorify?

Watch that sunset and learn to be again
Please, dear
With me
Let us lay down in the grass
And repeat our love again
There's something in listening to the wind
Or basking in the unfathomable sea
Beyond the evil in men's hearts
The present moment
Loving the leaves on a tree
And believing we are now once again free
I get lost in you ... will you be lost in me?
I profess my love to you, Dear,
I profess my love, honest and vehemently
You give a sappy romantic such richness to truly love
And only be in love with

And when I see you now, sweetheart
Tranquil, my sun, among worlds and starry seas
My sweet love
In such magna-glory
With that light bleeting song
I know we know not who we are
But, my lover, I give myself, I give my hand to thee

Serene are your eyes, you comfort my drear gloomy heart
Beyond seduction
You reach to hold my cold hands, and embrace me
You bring my doubt and confusion
Back to real innocence, to goodness, and to love
Back to Love's home, where I should stay, live, and be forever
Happily

Your honorable dream, your subtle loving courage
You are strong, you are like magic
Your love
And the unknown powers to me
To me you are all of the meaning I need
In this world, convinced
And yet we know not who we are
We know not who we are
We know not who we are!!
O -- but we are I N L O V E !!!

Gina, my sweetest lover, I see your reflection in a teardrop
I love you while walking the rain
I profess my love of you
To the thunder and lightening
Shouting
And in my beating heart you shall always remain
I wish to be near you
When I miss you, I can only endure the pain

And in the wind of changing I begin to learn your ways
And I show you mine
I want to hold you, warm against my chest
And kiss with a kiss that lasts forever
Just, as you, so sublime!!!
You, I desire to caress so!

When I dream I see, your love is the one
The one rose that never dies
You and I one -- God never shall forget
Are the makings and the making of love
The soul you share with me, most high
My love He is always proud of
More than a invisible childhood friend
You are my love come to be
As my youth has come to peak
This life together is all about us
I listen to hear the creator speak

And, underneath it all, these lines I sing, I sing
O, these lines, I dearly sing!
There's
No need to know anything
No need of a reason to be
I want only to love you close
And hear your voice sweetly say
Within the light you and I will always be
In an eternal love
Though we would be as ghost
Rememberance's heart never dies

And you bring my heart to truth
When you bring my love to reality
I sing a song of us, together
I never want to be lost, I never want to be a refugee of your love
I, a minstrel, I try to make love my speciality
More than war,
O, I sing a song of we!!!

O, my dear heart,
Gina, do you hear me now? O, do you love me so?!!
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Old 03-12-2007, 12:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this I feel unworthy to comment to it was very great, so many things captured parts were of Shakesperian quality lovely
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Old 03-12-2007, 02:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Pablo! this is indeed an epic ode to love...all the more sweeter when it's to your own love. Bravo! I love the twists and turns and the soft, tender moments encountered....

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Old 05-27-2007, 02:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Dear True,

A classic, and is quite memorable, soooooooo I brought it back for all to enjoy.

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