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Old 05-25-2007, 12:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Rainbow Dreams

Memories captured like photographs,
Lay scattered across my mind
Blazing embers of molten sighs
Are what you left behind
~
Words can not express or describe
Adequately your effect on me
Those times our souls treasured most
The whimsical waves of the loving sea
~
Our melodious love, pulsating heartbeats
Shadows vanish into radiant light
She asked for drifting clouds
To soften the light so the picture comes out right
~
Weaving expressions, blending words
Mixing hues, tones and colors,
As the painter and poet share fantasies
Of endless love, a true gift for all
While sailing and drifting in rainbow dreams
~
Memories captured like photographs
Lay scattered across my mind
Blazing embers of molten sighs
Are what you left behind
 

Old 05-25-2007, 01:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Weaving expressions, blending words
Mixing hues, tones and colors,
As the painter and poet share fantasies
Of endless love, a true gift for all
While sailing and drifting in rainbow dreams
so caught up in these lines not to mention the whole poem .. wot can i say .. i cant elaborate on this one coz it says it all and much more leaving no place for commentry only deserving of accolades.. those lines above are worth memorising and remembering for ever ..im smitten .. im so in awe of this piece ..thanx for sharing ..JONATHAN
 

Old 05-25-2007, 02:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Jonathan for your fantastic comment these are my true feelings of love and how to make the love in your feel loved
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Old 05-25-2007, 07:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Rainbow Dreams
Weaving expressions, blending words
Mixing hues, tones and colors,
As the painter and poet share fantasies
Of endless love, a true gift for all
While sailing and drifting in rainbow dreams


Dear Pooh Bear ,

So beautiful is this poem. I loved this stanza, as the blending of love, art, poetry, and rainbow hues combine. Beautiful is Poetry, and your poetry is simply beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Old 05-25-2007, 07:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Painted for your fantastic comment
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Old 05-29-2007, 08:11 PM   #6 (permalink)
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WOW Bear!

How beautiful! The imagery in this poem is truely a masterpiece of pure art! A painting of wonderment, the words blend together as the rainbow itself spans across the sky.

Awesome poem I loved it!!!



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Old 05-29-2007, 11:21 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Sally for your fantastic comment I am happy you enjoyed reading it
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Old 05-30-2007, 12:50 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Bear,

You do have a way
with your words.

The Following Text Is Quoted:
Memories captured like photographs,
Lay scattered across my mind
Blazing embers of molten sighs
Are what you left behind
~
Words can not express or describe
Adequately your effect on me
Those times our souls treasured most
The whimsical waves of the loving sea
Enjoyed the idea of
photos lingering in
the mind.

Thanks for the
read.
 

Old 05-30-2007, 02:58 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Thank you so much for this fantastic comment Jeez and your welcome
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Old 05-30-2007, 06:58 AM   #10 (permalink)
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WoW! This one is very beautiful to read, every line is wonderful! I loved "As the painter and poet share fantasies Of endless love" So great to read. Thanks for sharing
 


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