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Old 01-14-2007, 08:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Sweet wind
exhales from brass
notes dance la reverie
flesh pulsating, as I murmur
his name.

Dedicated to Sartor for pushing me to try my hand at my first Cinquain. Thank you Sartor.


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Old 01-14-2007, 10:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I do NOT believe this is your first Cinquain!!!!!!!!
It is Amazing!!! You have the form right ON and your imagery is FANTABULOUS!!!!!

My thanks ALSO to Sartor!!! Push her some more!!!! LOL!!!
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Old 01-15-2007, 07:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The sizzle Girl! That's wasn't any type of saxophone love I know - That was S-I-Z-Z-L-E with a captial izzle

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AW! Sweet! - I love the way you cinquain - Nice write KIM

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Old 01-16-2007, 01:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ahhhhhhhhhh........Painted, you have given me great honor. One never knows the breadth, depth or height of one's talent until it is pushed to the limits. Never be afraid to try a new form. Your Cinquain is well written.
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Old 01-17-2007, 12:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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OH!! My dear sweet Painted, Kim!! WOW!! You keep amazing me with YOUR NEW TALENTS. I love your Cinquain. The message is so powerful and well-written. I also LOVE YOUR NEW AVATAR!! It says so much about you: "A Talented Scientist, Artist, Writer, Poet, etc..." What else should we all know about you, dear?? You have an Amazing Touch for everything you touch!! Outstanding and Lovely!!...Just like all you do...Hugs. Sincerely, Starry.
 

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Thank you Ms Tree, Ms Jacquii, and Ms Stardust.....I was pushed yes, and am so pleased Sartor did. I not only learned, but found a new style to create from.

Yes Ms Tree tis my first, and from your fantabulous comments, will not be my last! Thank you so much my friend!

Sartor....thanks to you my extinct little caldera is rising again!

Ms Stardust...thank you soooo much for your beautiful words, and for noticing my brand new avatar!!! Your comments are humbling and I thank you.
 

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