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Old 06-22-2007, 12:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Secret Lover

I have a secret lover,
Who is good beyond compare,
She takes me to great depths in love,
And teaches me to care,

I have a secret lover,
Who is great to all extremes,
A kind and skillful lover,
She fulfills one’s wildest dreams.

A lover one can count on,
To be there in times of need,
Who puts me first, in each and every,
Action, thought and deed.

My secret lover’s always there,
Unless, I should digress,
For in my least digression,
She’s not there, I must confess,

I have a secret lover, who,
Will be here in the end,
One solitary lover, she will,
Be my lifelong friend.

My lover’s charms, unique as such,
My mind, my soul, aspire,
To join her in love’s ecstasy,
She’ll set my heart afire,

She gives me joy, that I’ve not known,
And will not know again,
My lover lives within my heart,
Forever to remain.

I have a secret lover and,
I am her only quest,
She said lest I surrender,
She will never, ever rest.

I have a secret lover that,
No one will ever find,
My lover is not visible,
Except for in my mind.
 

Old 06-22-2007, 01:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Ron,

This is wonderful writing my friend. And I truly understand this scenario, you'll find this allusion in what I write as well. My Fav:

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I have a secret lover and,
I am her only quest,
She said lest I surrender,
She will never, ever rest


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Old 06-22-2007, 02:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Jerry,

I had a lot of fun writing this one and was not certain how I intended to finish it until I arrived at the final verse. Thank you for reading and responding.

Ron
 

Old 06-25-2007, 03:40 AM   #4 (permalink)
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great write, enjoyed the read
 

Old 06-25-2007, 10:29 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Lisa,

Thank you for reading Secret Lover. I appreciate your kind words.

Ron
 

Old 08-05-2007, 04:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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ahh Ron..... we live for the fantasies in our minds hmm? Awesome write.
 

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Old 08-05-2007, 04:54 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Mysty,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment..........Fantasies of the mind are a great deal of what I write....... often when it sounds believable and real, it is still a fantasy.......... That is my world. Again, thanks........
Ron
 

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i love it!!! thank you for sharing it.
 


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