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A Time Of Separation

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Old 06-22-2007, 01:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Time of Separation


Though minutes seem like hours,
And each hour is like a day,
I can’t endure this time apart,
This distance I must stay.

The world demands, that we remain
Separate and in sorrow,
But as I look beyond this day,
There's hope for us tomorrow.

We now know only that our love
Must span the miles and time,
Till we can share, and love, and care,
All in our hearts and minds.

Sweet thoughts of you, a daydream,
A bit of time I borrow,
But as I look beyond this day,
There's hope for us tomorrow.
 

Old 06-25-2007, 03:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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a wonderful write, nice use of emotion
 

Old 06-25-2007, 10:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Lisa,

Thank you for reading this poem...... and for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

Ron
 


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