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Old 05-08-2011, 04:23 PM   #21 (permalink)
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MsJ,

must beg to differ on your notion that I AM says nothing more than i exist. Extrapolate that out for a bit. If i know i exist, there is more to me than a pulse and air passing through my lungs, or head, depending on your opinion. that being the case, if i can make a two word statement like this, which incidentally now has 555 reads lol, it means that i looked into myself past the skin i'm in. extending that thought, if i did that, then i must have seen all the good the bad and the ugly, everything people told me that i was or wasnt, threw out the lies and horseshit, and grabbed onto life with a death grip, survived the transformation, and know that being able to say those two words free of the past, of wounds, of my own sabatoge isnt a place everyone gets to in life. so in gratitude to my Creator, and in ecstatic amazement, I stand to say, I AM.

Kind of a short hand whitebread way of saying....

how u like me now?
Dear Zaac,
How do you like me now?? Well, I may say, "I love you, my sweet dear friend!!"
You have been such a wonderful friend for all of us, at Poetry in Color Forums,
since the very beginning, back in 2006. It has been over 5 years by now...
How do you like that, sweet David??... You have been "you", and we all
have been loving the sweet of you, the amazing you, David.
Smile!! God loves you, so do I...
Now, please, do take good care of yourself, and get back to us as soon as
you come back from your surgery. We care so much for your well being.
Get well soon, David. Good Luck on your surgery, my sweet dear friend!!
I shall call you soon. God's richest blessings may always abound in your life!!
In God's Garden,
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Old 05-09-2011, 05:06 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Zaac - you'll never convince me that your untitled poem which only consists of the words "I AM" is anything more than a silly attempt at something or other. I'm not sure what - but yeah - no need to debate "I AM" - that's insanity and I won't do it....any more LOL

But if you've convinced yourself of what you're saying= then it's all good.

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which incidentally now has 555 reads lol
It now has 594 views - but that doesn't mean that it's not crap



“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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