Velvet Bloom~

Moonchild · 08-23-2007, 04:41 PM

~VELVET BLOOM~

Silky lip-locked
maraschino kiss,
below pale moon glow
in sea-breeze kiss.

Budding bosoms
of flaming flesh.
Skin to skin
soft bodies mesh

Virgin flowering
in carnation croon,
she opens herself
in velvet bloom.

Lascivious petals
of throbbing pleasure
firmly enfold
her masculine treasure.

Blooming rose in
climax dawning.
Deep desire
intensely spawning.

© 2003 Karen Davies

erikestabrook · 08-23-2007, 04:49 PM

wonderful flow and word parring I liked this allot,
it was very intense

Moonchild · 08-23-2007, 10:24 PM

Thank you Erik for the wonderful comment.
I'm glad you like it

JolieH · 08-23-2007, 10:36 PM

Strong force of sexual energy. I love the images. Sweet cherries and the ocean breeze, Wow, sounds incredible.

"Lascivious petals
of throbbing pleasure
firmly enfold
her masculine treasure."

This is my favorite, and if he looks anything like the picture, he truely is a treasure to be had.

PaintedDiary · 08-23-2007, 11:32 PM

LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS!!!!!! Going in my favorites now!!!!!!!!! Shew!!!!!! Loved the intricate weaving of words like imported lace.......wooohooooo!!!!!! You go Moonchild!!!

Kim

Moonchild · 08-24-2007, 06:09 AM

Thanks so much Jolie.
Yeah that guy in the picture is hot...lol
Did you draw that red puppy with the cherries
in your siggy? How cute and very good!

Moonchild · 08-24-2007, 06:14 AM

Thanks a bunch Kim.
Love your comment, I appreciate it

PoetryInMotion · 08-25-2007, 12:36 AM

Moonchild

I liked this best

Virgin flowering
in carnation croon,
she opens herself
in velvet bloom

(Super!)

Well said

Art

Moonchild · 08-25-2007, 02:55 AM

Thank you so much Art,
I appreciate that

JolieH · 08-27-2007, 03:47 PM

QUOTE
"Did you draw that red puppy with the cherries
in your siggy? How cute and very good!"

Yes I did. I drew several for an internet, virtual dog breeding, game I use to be involoved in. This guy was one of my favorites.

Thank You for the complement.