Emotional Romantic:

[Charlotte Rutigliano]

Should the light of day
Ruin the beauty of the
Moon, a beauty like
The young love we share, so true.
See the beauty of this love.


Like this day so young,
Every moment I spend with
You, our love seems so
Strong, we get closer as time
Goes by, the words seem real.


As the the days go by,
We grow together and still
Our love groms stronger,
The words are as real as they
get< keep saying I love you.

[Gamaliel]

"If the words are as real as they get," then why the need to keep saying I Love you? I love the way you begin but I think it's impossible for the light of day to ruin the beauty of the moon, it only provides a temporary covering so that it can be appreciated anew when the light of day sleeps.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.