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[Zeblon]

Hi folks,

I've been experimenting with video and poetry..Anyhoo here's one of the results..

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[JolieH]

I like the video idea,
If I were to make suggestions. I'd cut were the hand covers the writing. Take some close ups, so we can read what it says. Use only one song and cut the length to 3 - 4 minutes max. This should give more visual impact and not frustrate the viewer by holding your hand in front of their eyes.

[Zeblon]

Hmm..All valid points..As I said I was experimenting..Plus I wasn't expecting an embed of the video as I only posted the url..The vid is much better if viewed in full screen..Cheers for watching and commenting..