[adult content] The Kamasutra Lady

booobooo · 05-14-2008, 02:02 AM

A mother of two she was in her late thirties. But uncle used her sparingly and her body was still in very good shape. Not an ounce of extra flesh anywhere. Her tits were proud 36d and looked hard and she was very happy to show them off. I do not know what was wrong with uncle but he did not seem to be much interested in her. We used to talk for hours and I would have a cup of tea late in the night with them before coming back to my home to sleep. It was now summer and though my parents did not but I would sleep on the open roof. To reach the roof I had to go through their verandah. This they did not mind. In fact both the husband and wife would also come to the terrace and we would talk for some time before they went back to their room. All these months I was eying aunty for any sign of approval for me. My chance came when one day uncle had to sleep in the hospital where a relative of theirs had taken ill. Aunty came to the terrace alone and we started talking our usual chat when suddenly aunty asked me if I had a girl friend. I said no and that I did not know much about sex. As an after thought I asked aunty if she would become my friend and teach me as to what a man and woman did in bed. She had a naughty smile on her face when she said “You want to know in words or in action?” I was flabbergasted and stammered, “As you wish aunty”.

She then went on for about 10 minutes to tell me how a man can make a woman happy by taking her lovingly and after a lot of fore play. On an impulse I asked her if uncle did all this? Her eyes became sad and she said no he doesn’t. In fact she said her husband is not much interested in sex. She said that most of the fun that she had in life was not with her husband but her father in law. I was really shocked to hear this but kept quiet. I slowly took her hand in mine and said that I was sorry. I also asked her very seriously that if she could teach me the art of making a woman happy I would love to do the service of making her happy. She took my hand and kept it on her boob. “Press them darling,” she said. From there on she kept instructing me. Ab mere blouse ke buttons khol do she said while her fingers were playing with my hair. I willingly obliged. I started to lie with her but she said “No, A man has to be attentive till the woman gets so hot that she too participates without inhibitions. Keep kissing me and playing with my boobs, and free them from the bra. Suck my nipples and say loving things like “Your boobs are so tight etc to arouse me further. A woman loves to be praised.” I obeyed. In fact she was so lovely that I did not have to make any effort. Her nipples were like grapes and I hungrily sucked on them. She kept playing with my hair, but a little more roughly.

Presently she started kissing my cheek and then she bit my chin. She was softly moaning now and her body was getting feverish and restless. “Love me darling, make me your own.” My hands wandered down to her sari and I pulled it out of her petticoat. Then it was the turn of the petticoat. She obliged by raising her ass so that I could slide the clothing off her white legs. She wore no panty and her pussy was clean shaved. She was now getting so aroused that her hands were squeezing my back skin and she guided my hand to her soaking cunt. Oh God. Her cunt was soooo smooth and hot and wet. I dipped my finger in her pussy and it went in easily. “Yesssss, she hissed, rotate it, and rub my clit.” I was a good learner and I started to use two and then three fingers to ply open her cunt and tease her clit. She started moaning loud now. Her hands were playing, now on my back, now in my hair. Her ass was rising and falling and her cunt lips were getting tight on my fingers. Suddenly she tensed and let out a groan as if gurgling sound from her throat. Later I understood that she had a massive orgasm. “Mmmmmmm she whispered in my ear, I needed that so badly.” By now my cock was rock hard and becoming painful. Aunty kept playing with me and kissing me every now and then. Ultimately she disengaged herself from me and went to the bathroom.

When she came back, she did not sit on the bedding but made me stand too. She one by one removed my clothes and then started sucking and biting my nipples. She again guided my hand to her boobs and took hold of my cock. “Lovely, thick and bell topped too”. She murmured. She played with my cock for some time and then lay down on the bed. “Come my love, fuck your aunty and make her happy.” She guided me to come between her legs and put a pillow under her butt. She then opened her legs in a V and raised them. As instructed I now put the tip of my engrossed cock on her cunt opening and pushed.

She was tight. She put her feet on my butt and pushed. At the same time she raised her own butt to allow my cock to be fully swallowed by her hot wet cunt. “Darling ab chodo apni aunty ko jor jor se. Phad do meri choot ko aur bujha do iski pyas. (Come now fuck your aunty and tear her pussy apart and make her happy.) I obliged. I myself was so involved that all I wanted was to shoot my wad, but aunty prompted me to go slow after some time. Then again she asked me to increase my speed. When I was sure that I would now burst she completely stopped my movements, kissing me and telling me how great lover I was.

When we started again I was out of my mind and started pumping her pussy so hard that my balls hit her ass. She too had her eyes closed and was uttering moans like Ahhhhhhhhhhhh , ooohhhhhhhhhhhh ,mmmmmmmmmmmmmm, yessssss , like that, fuck like that, Oh you are like a big stud you chootiya, chod jor se. I could no more control and told aunty so. She said it was ok and hugged me tight with her arms and legs and I shot my first hot load into her womb in long squirts. She too came with a big shudder. We lay in each other’s arms for a long time, catching our breaths. Soon it was time for a second fuck. I fucked her three times that night. After that we fucked whenever we could get a chance. She taught me many kamsutra ways of making love, the most delicious being Hindol asana.

MsJacquiiC · 05-15-2008, 12:28 PM

A bit titilating to be sure.... BOOOBOOO this story has potential - but it's so filthy dirty it's at times hard to concentrate on the content really. Someone actually wrote in the Chatbox earlier about your recent posts "dime novel porn...thats really not cool at all" - I tend to agree actually - but JPiC is firmly established in its non-censorship policy - I will briefly quote for you part of the Censorship Policy:

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Unnecessarily violent, objectionable, pornographic, racist, homophobic and/or hateful in anyway is not acceptible. Use common sense.

I'm not sure if you are testing this policy - but I must say that your post is bordering along the lines of pornography - MS GAIL just said in the Chatbox "There's porn and then there's erotica" --- I'm interested to know which genre you'd brand your story? At anyrate - you may want to stray away from posting such graphic stuff, and in my opinion, the story would have read much better without all the graphic elements. Example:

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I willingly obliged. I started to lie with her but she said “No, A man has to be attentive till the woman gets so hot that she too participates without inhibitions. Keep kissing me and playing with my boobs, and free them from the bra. Suck my nipples and say loving things like “Your boobs are so tight etc to arouse me further. A woman loves to be praised.” I obeyed. In fact she was so lovely that I did not have to make any effort. Her nipples were like grapes and I hungrily sucked on them. She kept playing with my hair, but a little more roughly.

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I, anticipating the moment I've long dreamed, happily and willingly obliged. I motioned to lie, wrapping my arms around her. She motioned simultaneously, "No! A man has to be attentive till the woman is eagerly aroused. She has to drop inhibitions and be willing. Kiss me deeply and softly stroke my nipples. Play with the ring even."

I was indeed a bit taken aback when I'd first seen her nipple rings.

"You have to whisper lovely and naughty things to me. Classy things though, my temperate-souled young lover. A woman loves to be praised nephew."

I obeyed. In fact she was so lovely that I didn't even need to try for the effort. It came naturally. Her nipples were like grapes and I treated them like precious fruit. Something to be coveted in times of drought.....

This is classy erotica and you may want to keep that in mind for any additional posts you make.
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Anyway - now that that issue has been addressed. I like the thought process your writing has evoked in me. Always incest has been a taboo subject. I won't state my personal opinions on the subject (I'm a bit eccentric with certain social aspects of life) - But it's interesting that you should post this story. I think if you actually tried to evolve the storyline a bit more - you'd actually have a winner. But it does seem like you unnecessarily concentrate on the more graphic aspects of the story; as if you intend to shock instead of illicit surprise. There's a subtle but distinct difference with "shock" and "surprise" --- I think you could have worked this story so beautifully that one would only have to admire the audacity of it, rather than be revolted by the nasty little cheap words.

Anyway - interesting post no doubt - It'd be nice to see you edit it, clean it up a bit and make the storyline a little tighter, and the dialogue more intimate & classy, the whole while keeping the motif of incest

- It'd make for a much more pleasant read.

Also - as JPiC Administrator - I don't generally advise this type of critique from other Members - because it was not solicited by you in any way - But because of the adult content - I feel compelled to critique.

Good luck on the rewrite and thanx for the sharing.

Jacquii.

booobooo · 05-16-2008, 02:39 AM

O.K.

Shall Not Happen Again.

Very Very Thin Line Between Erotica And Porn.

For me Nothing Is Porn. Porn Is Erotica And Erotica Is Porn. Have A Look At Books On Kakasutra. They Are All Sculptures Sculpted On Temples In India In A Place Called Khajurao. What Would You Call Them...Erotica Or Porn. I Just Explained Them In Words.

But, Still I Will Agree And Abide By The Rules Of This Site...Don't Worry.

MsJacquiiC · 05-16-2008, 07:52 PM

Hey BOOOBOOO - no worries - I'm pretty sure you know forum decorum

It's an interesting write - but I do think it can be cleaned up just a bit - It would make for a better read IMO - and interesting comment on the porn v. erotica "debate" lol - I do think there's a fine line that distinguishes the two. Anyway... Yeah... No worries

Jacquii.