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Legend of Mystic Forest chapter 5

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Old 06-30-2007, 06:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Legend of mystic Forest chapter 5


Winter passes quickly, and the forest welcomes spring with open arms as new life begins to grow. Trees showing signs of budding, the tulips are blooming, and the grass is a beautiful emerald green. There is an amazing aroma of lilacs, lavender, and tulips floating on the winds of time. As each day passes we are more and more anxious about getting out to our secret hiding place deep in the forest. Finally the days start to get warmer and the sun is bright shining turning everything to the spring colors bright brilliant shades of green reds purples every corol imaginable.

Moonlight peeks in from in between the willow trees. Whose leaves sweep the ground with a graceful air. Roses bloom with beauty and wonder, as ivy grows in delicate vines around a wall.
While water gathers in a pond of full of life. As a misty dew kisses the sweet flower petals.
Nature’s sweet music plays all around the forest. As Fireflies light up the night sky like the stars and moon. While the spirits whisper life secrets.

The gentle breeze gives our faces a tender airy kiss. All the while the spirits of the forest play and sing in peaceful harmony. In the night by moonlight and starlight nature blooms into its true beauty Nothing in the world can compare to this splendid wonder and sheer beauty. All round nature whispers and sings to us of her secrets and joys. This is where we want to live in peacefulness. Where nothing and no one can take this away from us. In the night where the real beauty takes place. When the moon peeks in from in between the willow trees.

Lying in the lush soft grass, we watch the morning rays peak through embracing branches
As dew springs forth on blades of grass. Reflections of iridescent light bounce off walled bushes and dance with water on green leaves. Birds sing as they bathe in the gathering dew. Their melodies drift through the air, making a peaceful tranquil place. Velvet petals begin opening and stretching toward heaven. Begging the sun to shine upon them and share its light. Reflections on water are the perfect mirror images of beauty, Brock seems calm in this enchanted forest where earth and heaven bring nature to life. There is no past - no future - only this beautiful moment

Nervously Brock strolls over to the river where Thalia is gazing at her reflection in the crystal clear water flowing serenely by. Dropping to one knee Brock takes Thalia’s hand looking into her magnificent blue eyes as he whispers My darling.

As we stand beside this beautiful river,
May our love always be as constant,
Unchanging as this graceful smooth surging river
Flowing endlessly to the depths of the sea.

Your love came softly upon my heart,
Just as the waves comes softly upon the river banks, and
Just as there will never be a morning without the rising sun,
There will never be a day without my love for you.

Thalia tries to say something but Brock just put a finger up to her lips and whispers shhhh~

My Love, My Darling, I pledge myself to you this day
Our love will be like this river that nourish’s the earth and sustains life,
may my constant devotion nourish and sustain you for all eternity

Thalia will you Marry Me ?

With tears streaming down her cheeks she cries out yes, yes my wonderful man my kindred soul-mate yes Ill marry you.
 

Old 06-30-2007, 08:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Ohhhhhhhh Bear!

How beautiful!!!!!
I was gasping at the end. weeping like a child! It was just too lovely for words. I was so very happy Brock asked her to marry him and I was equally glad that her answer was yes!.

Now, you must write part 6,
Tell us where they are going to live. At his home? or in the forest in her home?
Are they going to build a cabin in the forest? Are they planning to have children?
MORE! MORE! MORE!
Is there going to be more? I hope so.

It's so romantic.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings
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Goddess of the green grove.
Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 06-30-2007, 09:33 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Bear,

Handshakes dude!

You have captured both the romance of nature and man. Awesome write. I look forward to #6 too.

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Old 07-01-2007, 12:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Sally you'll have to wait for chapter 6 to find out lol hehehe thank you for you fantastic comment so happy you loved it
hugs kisses
Bear

Jerry
Thank you very much for you wonderful comment and Im working on chapter 6
handshakes
bear
 

Old 07-03-2007, 08:55 PM   #5 (permalink)
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*sighs dreamily* .... oh if only life were like that truely... Bear you make me dream romantic things and you make me smile. Thank You.

love

~Mysty~
 

Old 07-03-2007, 09:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank you so much mysty you know dreams do come true
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