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Old 07-11-2007, 01:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RAINDROPS ON MY TONGUE

I remember when I was young
Catching rain drops on my tongue
Though never enough to quench my thirst
The last drop was just as good as the first

The ones I missed always got me in the eye
Frustrated and determined, I’d give it another try
Mouth wide open and tongue sticking out
Squeezing my eyes shut to erase any doubt

I would get in a groove by standing in one spot
And finally started drinking cool rain, drop by drop

I would be soaking wet by the end of this game
that's about the time I'd hear mama call my name



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Old 07-11-2007, 01:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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RAINDROPS ON MY TONGUE

I remember when I was young
Catching rain drops on my tongue
Though never enough to quench my thirst
The last drop was just as good as the first

The ones I missed always got me in the eye
Frustrated and determined, I’d give it another try
Mouth wide open and tongue sticking out
Squeezing my eyes shut to erase any doubt

I would get in a groove by standing in one spot
And finally started drinking cool rain, drop by drop

I would be soaking wet by the end of this game
that's about the time I'd hear mama call my name



 

Old 07-12-2007, 02:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Tracy....Nice to read ya!!! Welcome to the JPiC Community for writers !!! I see you are getting the swing of things, lol. We have a myriad of phenomenal talent on the site, so please do enjoy the full realm of the site. We also have many forums for resources, games, the arcade, humor, music, novelists, and more!!!! I look forward to reading your work, and if you ever need anything, just shout in the chatbox, and / or PM us. We are here to assist you. Also, please do not hesitate to PM me for anything even just to say hi. Enjoy and happy posting!!

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Old 07-12-2007, 06:24 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice intro, very unique..
By the way..

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Old 07-12-2007, 08:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Welcome! I'm excited to see you here! Very interesting introduction. It made me smile! Hope you have fun here at jPiC!

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Old 07-16-2007, 09:55 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by acytra View Post
RAINDROPS ON MY TONGUE

I remember when I was young
Catching rain drops on my tongue
Though never enough to quench my thirst
The last drop was just as good as the first

The ones I missed always got me in the eye
Frustrated and determined, I’d give it another try
Mouth wide open and tongue sticking out
Squeezing my eyes shut to erase any doubt

I would get in a groove by standing in one spot
And finally started drinking cool rain, drop by drop

I would be soaking wet by the end of this game
that's about the time I'd hear mama call my name



Lovely introduction - And yes - don't we all have fond rememberances of life when we could actually forget about everything else and just try to catch rain drops? I sure do anyway....

At anyrate - Hi ACYTRA and welcome to the JPiC Community - Seems that you are familiar with the Forum procedure and such - but please do familiarize yourself with the JPiC Posting Policy - Enjoy AND HAppy posting! Any questions about the Forum just ask and I'll be happy to help

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Old 08-08-2007, 11:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Well, hello "Acytra" What a special way to introduce yourself, that was a lovely poem. Actually makes me think of my childhood, I did the same thing.
I welcome you to this site and hope you will enjoy being a part of all of us.
You will find this a great place to meet some friendly people.
Also get to read some very well written pieces.
Best of Luck...mrsmajor (Victoria)
 

Old 08-09-2007, 02:05 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Tracy...beautiful write...I love remembering! Funny how those simple times and games stick out in our memories, isn't it? Welcome poet.
 

Old 08-09-2007, 05:21 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Hey now Acytra,

Great intro, very visual. I think I remember playin' that game myself......
Lookin' forward to readin' ya......
Welcome aboard....
 


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