Miscellaneous:Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defy all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)
LOL TOM - the poem you sent me via PM is a different edit than both of those versions --- Thing is --- I like the version you sent via PM a little better - the line structure is more.................succinct and poetic I say... and the use of the word "our" in line 4 as opposed to "their" makes the poem a little more intimate - I'll get to work on the graphic a little later I think you'll like it too - the pic is SAUCY like hot wings
Jacquii.
The Following Text Is Quoted:
Again
A soft silken kiss like that of a rose petal
Exposes the passion within as two lovers indulge
In an evening of sultry dancing
Holding each other close our bodies sway and twirl
A soft gentle sigh escapes from her soft ruby lips
Followed by an evanescent smile and her faint whisper,
"Again."
“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---MsJacquiiC
Okey Dokey! Thanx so much TOM for your beautiful poem - I hope you like the sizzling graphic I chose to accompany it! It's now on GreetingsGalleryOnline.com
Jacquii.
“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---MsJacquiiC
These cards are wondrous and stunning as well. Beautiful words Tom painted on these eCards...just Ms Jacquii...what can I say..you are incredible with graphics! Love it!
Thanx YAWL for commenting - I L-O-V-E the flattery -- I'm glad YAWL like the card though! I agree MS KIM - beautiful words definitely needed a sizzling graphic for them!
Jacquii.
“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---MsJacquiiC
Re: Again
--- Thing is --- I like the version you sent via PM a little better - the line structure is more.................succinct and poetic I say... and the use of the word "our" in line 4 as opposed to "their" makes the poem a little more intimate - I'll get to work on the graphic a little later 
I think you'll like it too - the pic is SAUCY like hot wings 
Ms Jacquii...what can I say..you are incredible with graphics! Love it!
Thanx YAWL for commenting - I L-O-V-E the flattery 
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