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Old 03-24-2008, 01:38 AM   #11 (permalink)
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LOL TOM - the poem you sent me via PM is a different edit than both of those versions --- Thing is --- I like the version you sent via PM a little better - the line structure is more.................succinct and poetic I say... and the use of the word "our" in line 4 as opposed to "their" makes the poem a little more intimate - I'll get to work on the graphic a little later I think you'll like it too - the pic is SAUCY like hot wings

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A soft silken kiss like that of a rose petal
Exposes the passion within as two lovers indulge
In an evening of sultry dancing
Holding each other close our bodies sway and twirl
A soft gentle sigh escapes from her soft ruby lips
Followed by an evanescent smile and her faint whisper,
"Again."



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his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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Old 03-24-2008, 10:41 AM   #12 (permalink)
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That is soooo much better! Very intimate. Whew! The image I got made me feel like a peeping Gail, lol.

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Old 03-24-2008, 12:55 PM   #13 (permalink)
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thank you so much Jacquii
hugs kisses
tom
ps cant wait to see it

thank you so much gail
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Old 03-30-2008, 08:45 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Okey Dokey! Thanx so much TOM for your beautiful poem - I hope you like the sizzling graphic I chose to accompany it! It's now on GreetingsGalleryOnline.com

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“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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Old 03-31-2008, 06:09 AM   #15 (permalink)
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LOVE IT Jacquii love the picte and everything great work on both cARDS
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Old 03-31-2008, 04:07 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Dear Bear and Ms Jacquii,

These cards are wondrous and stunning as well. Beautiful words Tom painted on these eCards...just Ms Jacquii...what can I say..you are incredible with graphics! Love it!

CONGRATS!!!!!

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Old 03-31-2008, 09:19 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Thanx YAWL for commenting - I L-O-V-E the flattery -- I'm glad YAWL like the card though! I agree MS KIM - beautiful words definitely needed a sizzling graphic for them!

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“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
MsJacquiiC



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Old 04-02-2008, 04:44 AM   #18 (permalink)
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smiling Thank you so much Painted
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