Miscellaneous:

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

love is futile even when
it is not projected on
a loved one
to me, the memories will always stay
like everlasting impressions....
if only we could take back what we end up being
and show who we are in our highest hopes and dreams
then love will know the truth,
and love will not be based upon the outer image


i've always known that there is something to what we speak out loud
and the more i read into what could be behind the words
the more i fall into doubt...
so damn confusing this is.. trying to solve the mystery of intent....
what was the motive in these stances that we make?
sometimes the ground we stand is founded on fear...
and if we had our way, that fear would disappear....
and true victory of freedom would shine...


but no one will stand and speak thier minds....
is it any wonder how we divide?

[erikestabrook]

I have to say now I'm impressed with that ending,
and with the poem

[latishaslove]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by bloodletting_of_the_sky

if only we could take back what we end up being
and show who we are in our highest hopes and dreams
then love will know the truth,
and love will not be based upon the outer image

This is my favorite revelation in this poem. Honestly people miss out on experiencing real love because we hide who we are behind the words that come out of our mouth.

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

i'm constantly on a war against the space that distances us from eachother.. (the world in general)... this is one of these poems where i try to be as descrete as possible.. but it still sounds as if i'm screaming at the top of my lungs at the injustice of all the apathy we partake in everyday... and we just dont have any time to look "under the surface" in our fellow brother's words....

and yet againe i have 2 people who have listened to this cry.. i can only hope you both use this as a wake up call... in anyway possible.. to try and span the gap between the ones you love in your life.. and you...

forgiveness is the key here on earth... God gave us this.. we must use it!!!!!

thank you both

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Phil,

Now you have three people. This was quite a lesson to behold. Full of truth it is. I did perceive this from a global stance and tis sad to say that we are divided indeed. Funny, even your signature could be incorporated into this poem. No crystal ball, just words and words can etch. Thank you for posting this.

Kimberly

[solo]

Phil that was thought-provoking...I enjoyed that!

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

it's always good to have another pair of ears to listen... thanks PD for being here againe.... to share and express and agree... makes me feel like i have my own little nitch here, if not anywhere else.. at least here i can become what i always wanted to be... someone without any set backs...
what a joyous yet sad releif that is.. to be free here and dead in the world.