03-22-2011, 07:50 PM
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Re: Blank (Inspired by rejection)
Wow - nice piece - there's a lot of grammatical errors in it though: whose should be who's, harass should be harrassed, single should be singled, etc... But those are more of a nuisance, they don't negatively impact the poem, but should be correct just the same.
The Following Text Is Quoted:
Originally Posted by Azekiel-Horizon
In the end, they accept rejection
A hurtful realization that the only thing they
and others will accept is that this outcast will always be an outcast
I like the last 3 lines. As a bit of a loner and social outcast - this made me think. But I don't consider myself the type of person who "accepts rejection", but rather the type of person who has embraced reality as to not be weighed down and crushed by the disappointment that being a loner often causes with people who are not comfortable being in only their own presense... ((if that makes sense...)) But yeah - this was a bit personalized for me, as it seems something I've experienced .
What rejection (if I might ask) inspired this write?
Jacquii.
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