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Old 05-15-2008, 02:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Blank pages and the dry scent of summer.
I keep finding myself writing every line about you.
Perhaps my mind can't comprehend what's been proposed
Or maybe I'm just not meant for this.
Give me all you got
Give me your best fucking shot
We'll see who wins this time.
"I've seen lovers dancing in windows."
-Craigary Michael Owens.
 

Old 05-21-2008, 02:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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short ,but yet the words speak with power that reflects what you were thinking at the time, nice write.

~Peace
 

Old 05-21-2008, 10:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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What I really love about your poems is that they are not conclusive, and the mind wonders on and on, in and out, skimming along different scenarios... love it!! I have to agree with Virgin (Q) as well...lots of girl power here!

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Old 05-23-2008, 07:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thank you both for lovely comments, glad you enjoyed it (:
flook x
 


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