Miscellaneous:

[Karma]

I wrote this about 11 years ago. It is a very emotional piece to me, but I thought I would share it with you all as my first submission
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Now I see I can never replace
the absence of your angelic face,
And now from above in your heavenly place,
Can you see? Can you know of my grief and disgrace?

Now I wish you were here with me
For my arms to hold and my eyes to see.
What did I do damnit, you were my baby?
Now I regret, can you ever forgive me?

A selfish decision for anyone.
Selfish me, and now you're gone.
I cannot undo what is done is done,
I wish I could know my unborn son.

And even now from where I sit
I wonder how you feel about it.
Would my life you like to omit?
Should I suffer in Hell's dark pit?


How sorry I am words cannot say.
Please, I beg, forgive me someday;
Then in my heart you always can stay,
And never again would I send you away.

7/95

[erikestabrook]

magnificent poem karma, the simple rhyme structure coupled with gripping emotion of such an event in your life, I enjoyed this allot it was really good

[NeyNey]

Beautiful, I can actually relate to this, with a long you-dont-want-to-hear tale. But I connected with this poem. Thankyou for sharing, very talented writer you are.

[Karma]

Wow, thanks a ton, both of you, for the positive feedback.