Miscellaneous:

[jakeminick]

One two, let me chase you
As your tail weaves subtle hints
Of affection through the air
Coaxing me
Into the arms
Of your blur
Fading
As you go floating
On the winds
Of the latest breath
To caress your self-worth

So I pine for a moment,
Only to reinforce the skin
Keeping in the vulnerable buttons
Brushed ever so lissom
By your willowy tail

But, alas,
You dance around me
Whenever you fancy a frolic
Between the beaming cracks
In my emotional shell

So I shed another layer,
Coiling in the distance
Feigning indifference
To the whimsical passions
Of your narcotic tail

And find you
Curled on the floor
Bored with my actions
To recoil attraction
Whenever the toxins
Have dried
In my quixotic well…

Let’s get drunk…

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by jakeminick

So I pine for a moment,
Only to reinforce the skin
Keeping in the vulnerable buttons
Brushed ever so lissom
By your willowy tail

But, alas,
You dance around me
Whenever you fancy a frolic
Between the beaming cracks
In my emotional shell

Nice write! It's novel conceptually - a cat and a snake...dancing. Too literal I'm sure, especially considering the "beaming cracks" and "narcotic tail" and "quixotic well" of drunkeness? Now my read-between-the-lines-ism does indeed want legalized medicinal marijuana as the law of the land LOL

Thanks for the share Jake = really another wonderful write from you

J.

Anyway -

[jakeminick]

thanks Jacquii. it's kind of thing saying you don't know how much you actually like someone, so you don't want to bare any feelings. but then you get drunk and you don't care about the consequences of tomorrow, so you just go for it. then you have recollect what kind of emotional strings were pulled last night, and it makes you recoil because that was the drunk you, and not the sober you. so, you just want to get drunk again so you don't have to care. or maybe i'm just pussy who can't stand the thought of walking around emotionally naked. peace out.

[MsJacquiiC]

Emotionally naked is not such a bad thing when you consider that there are others emotionally naked as well. Could be a nice little community of nakedness...

Anyway - I think when you bare all (regardless of inebriated status), that when you do drop the inhibitions and let the truth out, it can only lead to a good thing....or make you aware that a certain situation/thing/whatever is not for you LOL --- So for me ==> 3 cheers for the truth coming out via dropped inhibitions or whatever. Long live the truth.

Now... Where'd I put that 6-pack...? Sobriety is so overrated

[budeeb]

Wow. This was insane, in a good way. Nice write.