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Old 09-27-2006, 03:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Impossible purity I dream for in my mind Heavenly aspirations
Thinking of my sins left far in the past behind With spiritual questions -- Eternity on my brow
Never forgiving myself I find
When I know I should

When I know I should

And - the world - allow!!!




Memories of failures dig deep inside my soul
Until I begin to feel a certain loss of control
And must struggle to keep my eyes with the word of sweet infant dream goals
Like I know I should

Like I know I should

Hey!

Change comes to be and through this I stay
In my hopeful desire and in my needing way
Faithful, watching the world wax as though it were a play
Removed, in make-belief visions, while the adults are out sculpting their love this way

I am naught but a poet child

They are
Trying to bring to life all they dream of to be
As the god or gods pass their judgments above silent without remorse openly
And I attempt to console myself certainly devoted to wine and the ideal But in my heart I feel real peace on Earth shall never be

Peace on Earth never shall be

Not until Hell freezes over or Heaven comes down




But maybe we could listen ....



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And, Gina, when I see you needing I reach out in hopes of to help
Wishing that you will not shrink away for fear entirely, inside yourself
If I am not good enough inside I will die, the cards of fate cruelly dealt
For I cannot stand to see you cry Yeah, In your dreams I have dwelt
And if you die ... I want to never wake up, Oh yeah!

Never can I ever make up
The loss of your beautiful heart, Innocence of love's art
Which always did give its absolute most from the start
Which always did, the truth, I feel, impart in God's omnipotence And not as a lark


And you have won the love of my soul, spirit, mind, and life

O, my woman of this universe, O for your soul purity, you are one apart!!! A light in times of darkest strife and painful woe

In my life of fearing ghosts



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I beseech LOVE itself -- "Your day will come again ... with the revolutions ... and bring the love of all the heavens ... your contribution ...

in the vessel of new babe born and forgiveness shared, and holiness will have again won And justice in the afterlife we all have faired

And the crossroads of youth's expectations left far behind

Here I stand, peer into that tranquil lake alive

And in its reflection with no doubt see

Still waters truly run deep

Here I am in the image shown -- now a Newfound man

Now fully grown, to be


Gifted, blesssed, and surrounded by the beautiful and majestic sea

Enormous, exotic, mysteriously

With the bounties of soul passion love to give and take all delightfully in love for the rest of this simple life -- O, a song to be sung harmoniously !


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Old 09-28-2006, 11:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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HELLO TRUEBLUE!! WOW!!...This is an awesome Poem!! I love it!! I also love your Poem "Stardust!!"...You are indeed, a child and a Great Poet, with true Inspirations from your soul and your heart of hearts. You are truly gifted and blessed by God!! Please, keep your beautiful Poems flow from your heart!! I am delighted in reading your wonderful words of wisdom!! I think, you are so Special!! God Bless You, True Blue!! Sincerely, Stardust.
 


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