Miscellaneous:

[butchiesmom]

a wanting to be whole
a moment of completion

I wondered about this poem until I realized it was more of a love poem and thought about it again. I read it several times, trying to get the whole of what you were saying and each time discovered more! The two lines above so completely finish it that I found myself feeling satisfied at the end.

I had only one nit and I hope you don't mind. I've put it in bold.
of existence it's left

I enjoyed reading and rereading this poem. The graphic, which I assume was deliberate, is perfect for it.

hugs,
Gail

[solo]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by butchiesmom

a wanting to be whole
a moment of completion

I wondered about this poem until I realized it was more of a love poem and thought about it again. I read it several times, trying to get the whole of what you were saying and each time discovered more! The two lines above so completely finish it that I found myself feeling satisfied at the end.

I had only one nit and I hope you don't mind. I've put it in bold.
of existence it's left

I enjoyed reading and rereading this poem. The graphic, which I assume was deliberate, is perfect for it.

hugs,
Gail

gail...you are right about the spelling.....I seem to be losing my grip on spelling as I age...so ....I need somebody to point those errors out!

This poem was meant to be about the nature of love and sex...having found a spiritual and emotional connection with that somebody special...a desire to be one with that person is foiled by the physical nature of existEnce (well I need to practice that word now see)....so one is left wondrously touching....but in the case of true love...ehem...that touching is not about the sex only...it is a desire to be whole ...a moment of completion...

Anyways that's my point of view and I'm sticking to it

Thanx for reading....you read with care and interest. It is appreciated