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Old 03-29-2008, 01:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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i'm sorry....I was trying something that didn't work once uploaded....

the tiny text below in the terribly tiny picture that is way too tiny to read......goes like this:

complete

wanting it is
a thing of completion
while we speak of
a marriage of minds,
we may speak of
a melding of souls,
my body strives to enter
languishing in
this physical limitation
of existance it's left
wondrously touching
physical and spiritual desire
to be yin to your yang
yang to your yin it is
a wanting to be whole
a moment of completion

©2008 robynne
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Old 03-29-2008, 01:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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actually solo all you have to do is click on the image and the whole poem with the pic show themselve, so you didn't mess up also you can load it as an atachment that way they'll both be large,

as far the poem very nice, sensual, pleasing and utterly elegant verses
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Old 03-29-2008, 02:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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actually solo all you have to do is click on the image and the whole poem with the pic show themselve, so you didn't mess up also you can load it as an atachment that way they'll both be large,

as far the poem very nice, sensual, pleasing and utterly elegant verses
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well i'm glad you like it erik!
 

Old 03-30-2008, 01:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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This is a very wonderful piece of work Solo .... I quite love it... this one is definitely going in my favorites. Thank You for sharing this excellent work.


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Old 03-30-2008, 08:03 AM   #5 (permalink)
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complete

wanting it is
a thing of completion
while we speak of
a marriage of minds,
we may speak of
a melding of souls,
my body strives to enter
languishing in
this physical limitation
of existance it's left
wondrously touching
physical and spiritual desire
to be yin to your yang
yang to your yin it is
a wanting to be whole
a moment of completion

©2008 robynne
Dear solo,

This is truly beautiful in every aspect....choice of words, visual, execution, and message. This is quite memorable and lasting. I could not read just once, nor could I quote a favorite part or line. I love your work and look forward to reading your work as well. Like Mysty said...this is going in my favorites and an excellent rating solo.

Kim


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Old 03-30-2008, 07:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I too gave you an excellent rating..... so now that makes 2
 

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Old 04-05-2008, 01:49 PM   #7 (permalink)
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This is a very wonderful piece of work Solo .... I quite love it... this one is definitely going in my favorites. Thank You for sharing this excellent work.


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thanx mizz mysty!!!!!

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Old 04-05-2008, 01:53 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Dear solo,

This is truly beautiful in every aspect....choice of words, visual, execution, and message. This is quite memorable and lasting. I could not read just once, nor could I quote a favorite part or line. I love your work and look forward to reading your work as well. Like Mysty said...this is going in my favorites and an excellent rating solo.

Kim
Thank-you Kim!...I'm glad you liked that....my muse is amused
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I too gave you an excellent rating..... so now that makes 2
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Old 04-06-2008, 10:39 PM   #9 (permalink)
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i have an answer poem for that if you'd like to see it. let me know

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Old 04-16-2008, 03:42 AM   #10 (permalink)
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i have an answer poem for that if you'd like to see it. let me know

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sure zaac....I would like to see your answer poem....all responses are welcome...yes, let's see it then....


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