Miscellaneous:

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

dark on a bright day...
head down, nothing to say
to anyone, she was away
in a world of spite, this was her impression
of the life all around her
rejection, spat her back out....

she asked herself...
"why does everyone take this game for real?
why am i stuck with what they think about me?
how can i rise above what they say?
how can i define myself? how can i find myself?"

dead on a lively day
mouth shut, locked in place
to anyone that it concerned
he was gone, drowning in the burden of his impression
a world cold and cruel... made his days miserable
forced to accept circumstances out of his control....
dare he speak out? for dear of being shown......

he asked himself....
"why i am i a victum to my past?
everyone else can let go but i cant....
my opinions, when spoken, hated...
my love, when shown, misunderstood.
how can i be myself, someone the world rejects?"

[Kit Carson]

I like this. These two should meet, but there's no chance of that with the world tuned out is there? Our perception of the world around us affects the way we live our lives and thus the outcome. Very good writing. I think you have a typo,...dear should be fear, right.

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

yeah i know.. it's very unlikely that people with the same issues will ever meet... or at least people who are wondering how to get out of thier hole...
that's what i normally spent my days dreaming for... but it's just a dream...
and yes dear should be fear.. thank you my good freind