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Old 12-23-2006, 10:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Crazy Home Ariono-jovan Labu Started This Thread
Pedro had the most annoying
opera- sopranic scream,
client casa del loco
diagnosed as heavy schizophrenic
wildly delusional.
Would erratically pace
the shaggy- beige hallway carpet
back & forth
back & forth
bobble- head, hands raised in submission,
eye's rolling without
gravitational restraint
as if searching for dreams; secrets
behind a misplaced memory.

Leave Me Alone/ Leave Me Alone
Leave Me Alone
he'd owlishly- slur
in polyrhythmic melody
as if fervently possessed. Felicia,
the butch on staff
was always first to yell,
"Pedro-
Shut The Hell Up,
Take That Shit To The Room!"

Fuh- fu- fuck Youuuu- Shut Up!
he'd mimic, mock,
before darting off down the hall
like a wingless pigeon screaming
Help Me- Help Me- Help Me!!!

Running from transparent demons
none of us staff could
seemingly visualize.
 

Old 12-24-2006, 11:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I enjoyed this one it made me laugh alittle and smile,
oddly enough it made me think of my days as a stocker
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