04-12-2008, 06:12 PM
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Re: The Depth of My Soul
Dear Bear,
Every poem of yours is like a new trip to the candy store! I love this as well. It makes me warm and as if I am watching two love birds and just smiling at them. A few places I believe may need commas I think. You have an hourglass of undying pure love in the sands. Beautiful Bear, just beautiful!
Painted
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Never, Never____ Stop Painting Your Diary!!
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