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Old 05-11-2007, 02:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Prophecy of Buring Gerk

New star birthed under strange skies,
Search all infants for the mark of the chosen.
Voices guard the one who will return,
Freeing those held frozen in time.

Star child guarded by those in the hereafter,
Child of destiny hidden in plain sight.
Stone reveals what is otherwise hidden,
Train for the fight in ten years hence.

Seeker, guard against those who also know,
The star child will find its way to you.
Seeker, star, stone will unite,
Rightful heir will restore Buring Gerk.

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The prophecy for the book I'm writing titled: Eilia
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Old 05-11-2007, 10:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Well is this a
story your doing, cause
you got me wondering
all ready.

Nice and interesting.
 

Old 05-14-2007, 08:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah - I wonder also about this novel - Sounds AWESOME actually GAIL. You've piqued my curiosity with such a beautiful scribed poem.

And speaking of the poem - what a lovely rhythm it has. A solid write!

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Old 05-16-2007, 12:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks, Jeez and Jackie! This was one of the harder poems I've written because it had to match the storyline I've finally come up with. Chapters one and two are already written and posted and I have two paragraphs for the third one. This is something I've wanted to write but always thought I'd write scifi/fantasy, not fantasy with a bit of middle ages or something like that, lol. Characters have taken over and are holding me hostage, lol.
I hope you check out the first two chapters, Eilia 2 and Eilia chape 2. I'm not sure exactly how this will work itself out in the end, but I already have some of the last chapter in mind. I find, for myself, creativity doesn't flow, it spurts, lol.
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Old 04-27-2008, 09:26 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Prophecy of Buring Gerk


Family passed by The Five
New regime thought safe.
Unknown, from old family hides
Count two generations for the time.

New star birthed under strange skies,
Search all infants for the mark of the chosen.
Voices guide the one who will return,
Freeing those held frozen in time.

Star child guarded by those in the hereafter,
Child of destiny hidden in plain sight.
Stone reveals what is otherwise hidden,
Train for the fight in ten years hence.

Obscured, guard against those who know,
Child of the stars will find its way to you.
Hidden, star, stone will unite;
Rightful heir will restore Buring Gerk.

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