08-22-2006, 07:15 AM
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Re: Experimental imagery
Dear Amzy,
I read this a few times; even the title. The title first captured my attention. I thought, based on the title, what I was about to read, may not really be. I should let my mind be open to changing roads, so to speak. This is some "Experimental Imagery" Amzy! Read like a love poem, then the following stanza made me freeze, and I read this stanza alone, several times. The "experimental imagery" is profound, I am almost speechless.....>
Wrapped up in you I hover
Ten inches off the ground
When will we be discovered
I’m sure we will be found
but the last line, oh that last line is gruesome, and scary--->
The best noose I’ve ever tied
After reading that, I went to read your poem a couple of my times. I thought of someone hanging themselves, I thought of someone describing a relationship, I thought of an addict tying a hose around their bicept, and perhaps describing "their" eurphoria. What I thought is indeed "Experimental Imagery"!!! Bravo!!!, for you made me so interested, as to try to figure out the meaning, (and their could be more than one), that I began to interact with your words, I was swooped in your poem, I was involved with your poem. To have that talent my friend is pure genious. This is some poem. What talent to behold. Words are power, as my friend michael says, and this poem is powerful!! WoW Amzy!!!!!! Conceptually speaking of this piece, I felt sad. To "imagine", (if I choose to think of the poem as someone gratifying in hanging themselves), someone equating this serious act as something euphoric, was sad, the act alone is sad, to visualize this, was sad. I was extremely "MOVED", by this piece Amzy.
Painted Kim
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