Miscellaneous:

[zaac]

i'm getting faded.
Been tried and jaded;
diconnected,
resurrected,
for the rewind trip
on the outside edge.

the lingo's strange.
Tryin' to rearrange
the 26 soldiers of what i said
to bring the darkness
to the big screen
in your head

Don't say a word.
i dont wanna hear it.
where were you when
my blood ran cold?
i'd tell you, but the story's
getting old.

anger is fun
when it gets things done
just can't seem to find the off switch

God's in His Heaven
laughing like hell,
while my tears mix with
bone and blood
for a thunderstorm cocktail

It's like a saturday night's oblivion
open 24/7,
with a sign that flickers sickly
in the cold damp rain;
dont give up hope...jesus loves you.
best laugh i've had in a long time.

i'm fading...

[erikestabrook]

zaac these rhymes were so cool,

enjoyed very much by me

[JONATHAN]

anger is fun
when it gets things done
just can't seem to find the off switch
God's in His Heaven
laughing like hell
while my tears mix with
bone and blood


I love this one ... I guess it screams humanity and the doubts , frustrations and anger that comes with being human ... felt like that way too .. like the anger switch had been switched on and just would'nt go off n God sat up there doing nothing .... Abandoned ..is'nt that the word ... great write bro ... rating 5 star ...Chester

[Beth Castillo]

I like the rap-like quality to this poem ... it gives power to it's passion.

[zaac]

too bad it has to be about not giving a damn. thank you for your comments. i appreciate them.

zaac

[zaac]

Ok I wrote this in a flash...only took a couple miutes. I know kinda what it mean for me, but I wanted others opinion of how they daw what it meant to them...

kinda nervous about what i will hear...lolol

zaac

[Beth Castillo]

Can't one be passionate about not giving a damn? ... I know my 16 year old son is

[zaac]

lolol thats funny. you made my day.

[nomadicrhymer]

anger is fun
when it gets things done
just can't seem to find the off switch

God's in His Heaven
laughing like hell,

zaac, I really tuned in to these lines...probably because anger is productive for me...most of the time...when I am angry I get a lot done, just to take my mind of it...cleaning especially...I am a mad woman! lol!

God's in His Heaven
laughing like hell. Well, I'm not sure if He's capable of laughing like hell...but I found this to be pretty funny because I immediately got a visual of an old white bearded guy in a night dress stomping his feet and waving his arms laughing uncontrollably.

Anyway I'm glad it's something you wrote fast and furious...hopefully got it off your chest as well, and was more at peace afterwards. I wish that for you.

Nomad