Miscellaneous:

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

you, my worries, nightmares, fears,

they all somehow come back to you...

how i remember why i used to make you proud

then the day came when i made a mistake...

and the disappiontment from you never went away



i could never escape..

even though i was just a kid in those days...

then the way i gave in, gave up...

thought i never would make anything of myself...

simply because the faith i needed from you..

you never gave...



now i cant take living..

moving forward is a mental pain...

because i doubt every step i take...

i anticipate critisism everyday...

and i break inside...

because you stole my dreams from me..

replacing them with bitter prophecy of failing future days...



please give me some forsight..

some light i can see...

i dont know how i can keep blindly moving like this...

please take those memories....

give me confidence againe...



cant keep bending from all this wieght...

lighten my burden....

bring back my faith....

make my future seem not like such a impossible dream

[nomadicrhymer]

This is a deep and painful cry from the bottom of the psyche, Blood...it seems to be a howl for attention from a parent who had a negative effect on the writer while he was growing up...and he is still seeking approval and love.

Very riveting, blood!

Nomad

[Aumakua]

Wahhhh i love it
*sniff* I find it quite sad though =(

This stanza i can most relate to:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

now i cant take living..

moving forward is a mental pain...

because i doubt every step i take...

i anticipate critisism everyday...

and i break inside...

because you stole my dreams from me..

replacing them with bitter prophecy of failing future days...

Excellent job