Miscellaneous:

[PaintedDiary]

First Time

Can taste champagne and strawberries
passion afloat like hot pumus
in a wanton sea of aphrodisia
Exchanging
cool vaporous breaths on bear canvas
melting
sweet
like warmed slow churned butter
tongue samples every crevice
exploring unknown archeology
connecting every constellation
tasting every elliptical galaxy
with wet, soft, caresses
every tremor stronger than the last
I'm ice skating on the rings of Saturn
then you enter my universe
Exchanging
to supernova sounds
celebrating
the layer of me titled "the other"
woman that is
when I opened my eyes
you said I was beautiful
you said I look like...poetry
shameless I felt
I giggled
as it was only our
First Kiss

[Insightful_Kitten~]

hehehe..naughty.. lol lovin the metaphores with the constelations and galaxies.. i also have a lot of poems with the same interests.

[PaintedDiary]

Hehehehehe, thanks for taking precious time to read and comment Apryl. Can't wait to read yours as well.

{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}

[Altree94]

Only the first kiss???!!!
LOOOiiii - You GOT me!

Awesome write, sis!
Keep up the GREAT work!
Love,
Tree.

[PaintedDiary]

Thanks Tree for taking precious time to read and comment. LOO! I wanted a different approach for this one, and it came out like this. LOL I cannot thank you enough for your continued support, Love Ya!

{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}

[PaintedDiary]

This one is next for pub I believe...Kim

[zaac]

that was so sweet my teeth hurt. a nice little moment caught and suspended for all time.

zaac

[Bear]

mmmmmmmmmm very sensual erotic and beautiful magnificent penning Painted
hugs kisses
bear

[nomadicrhymer]

lol! Kim!!! First time...I have to say I was expecting something a little more "scandalous"...u certainly got me too...love it though...wonderfully innocent!

Nomad

[PaintedDiary]

Thank you Zaac, Bear and Ms Nomad for reading and commenting on my lil ditty..hehehhe

PD