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Old 05-03-2011, 02:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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When an introverted doll
Hits a wall, the innards stall.
The sense of function
Is jittered
As the pull-strings
Constrict at the air
Of experience.
An air of grit,
With heaps of strings
Dangling from
Symbolic playthings.
Running on cells
Of empty semantics.
An ugly clutter against
The internal mural
Of pensive puppet...
 

Old 05-09-2011, 10:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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An ugly clutter against
The internal mural
Of pensive puppet...
Wow Jake - I love the abstract concepts in this piece - the last 3 lines are expansive, meaning that it's 3 lines of text - but allows for the mind to read much more into those lines than the 3 you see... If that makes sense lol.

Anyway - this made for an intriguing read. Thanks for the share!

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Old 05-10-2011, 07:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks for the comments Jacquii. always appreciated.
 


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